Burning (poem) by Donna Maris on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 17, 2003

This was excellent, I loved this, beautifully written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by michael

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Passion and feelings flow through you into your pen...Well done...michael

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

a wonderful piece that....consume the thought on both ends.....

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

"Burning Up" is a lamp of desires nourish with oils of life scented by

Cupid with aroma of satisfaction to please Frigg. It is a lamp that

keeps its light on blinking to keep alive the reason of living. It can't stop

its oils from burning for desires must be fulfilled and the only thing to be

recalled is pleasure for it brings energy to keep its flame on.

�Burning Up� delivers its message from the first to the last line.

I have enjoyed a pleasant and striking reading.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Dena Moore

Reviewed on July 10, 2003

Beautiful!

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

Some like it hot and you definitely get that in this poem. This is not as naughty as you usually are but it's sweet and definitely romantic.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

full of passion, this write! well done, donna! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

(((donna)))

just gorgeous...passionate and beautifully written

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)