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A Stinker of an Elf
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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Oh, he was so bad that Santa had to step in...


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A Stinker of an Elf
 
Alfie, the elf was a real little stinker.
Who used his brain but was not a thinker.
He would put raw eggs in Santa Claus’ boots.
And sew all the sleeves shut on Santa Claus’ suits.
 
Alfie would tease the little elves and have them in tears.
He’d give them wedges and pull their long ears.
The more they’d cry the more he would tease.
He taunted them and totally disregarded their pleas.
 
Papa Elf had no idea what to do with his little elf son.
He’d ground him till doomsday but he’d be outdone.
For Alfie would sneak out through the chimney flue,
He’d stay out all night and sometimes the next day too.
 
So Papa Elf went to Santa for some sound advice.
On how to control Alfie so he might become nice.
Santa listened intently and told Papa to dress him warm.
He was taking Alfie on a ride, where he will be reborn.
 
Papa Elf did as Santa said and was waiting by the sleigh.
Santa and Alfie were flying off into the skies of grey.
The first stop was in an alley all dark and scary place.
There sat a boy holding a tiny girl with fear on her face.
 
Santa handed him a bag of clothes with food inside.
The boy first fed his sister, as his little sister cried.
Then they went to an apartment with no funiture at all.
There were 7 children sleeping from large to very small.
 
The apartment had no food, beds or toys of any kind.
Alfie felt such sadness and had no peace of mind.
Oh, Santa I’m so sorry for all the bad things I’ve done.
I never meant to hurt anyone; I thought it was all in fun.
 
I had no idea there was such sadness in this world today.
But when I see these children, I don’t know what to say.
Alfie changed at that moment and became the best Elf Santa had.
He strived to bring happiness, so no child would again be sad.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "A Stinker of an Elf"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 23, 2008
OH, so heartbreaking and heartwarming. Brilliant. Liz

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
Wonderful story! And I am reminded of the song..."What's it all about, Alfie?" hee, hee...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
Another fine creative piece aptly written in timely fashion, Bonnie. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
A wonderful story within a poem!

Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Bonnie I loved this, Ive missed your inspiring words of encouragement, you are truly a blessing, and if you dont mind Id love to share this poem with my niece
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Bonnie, you are one of a kind! Now you have me believing in elves!
This is a memorable little story with a great lesson. I'm so glad Santa knew what to do with little misguided Alfie.
Love ya, Sis,
Connie

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
...a wonderful and inspired story...you have given us Bonnie. May these words reach far...
John

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
a lovely poetic tale
thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Bonnie,
Like Fee, I know several children who need this special ride. Superb writing, my friend.

Blessings and love,
~Linda

Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Hi Bonnie May
A lovely poem. What a pity some older children, not only little ones, can't see the light as Alfie did. Cheers! Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
I could think of more than a few children who like Aflie could be taken on a trip like this.

fee

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Bonnie... you are such a talented writer...and your inspirational writing is extremely wonderful. This is another beautiful write. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Bonnie, I love your inspirational poems. They are very moving. ~ Sara

Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Bonnie~!

A story within a poem - your poetic magic is one to behold!!


LOve & Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
what a remarkable transformation Alfie made -- Santa is a great sage indeed -- a wonderful poem to ground at this time of year Bonnie -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Beautifully heartfelt and poignant write, Bonnie; one of your best! Welcome back; I've missed you! May you have the Merriest CHRISTmas EVER!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0

Reviewed on December 14, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of a magical story-poem.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Baby Girl! You just gotta turn this gem into a children's story book! It will become a Christmas Classic! I just LOVED THIS! LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
You rock, Bonnie!!!

Just like Alfie, we have a bunch of people who need to take that ride with Santa. Very neat story with a superb moral :-)

Ted

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
What an original Santa tale, should be in a children book.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Just shows you there is still hope for all those stinkers out there I guess!!

Thanks for sharing Bonnie!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Beauty and goodness shine in you, dear Bonnie. -gene.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
The start of this was happy...then near the end a message with the power to make us realize this scene is very true. Bonnie, a most excellent elf story from a most wonderful person!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
A good Christmas fire-place story!

Georg


Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Beautifully, poignantly penned - well done, Bonnie, I've missed you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Learning from experience I guess is better than being taught with a stern hand...must be the mother in you, that Alfie did learn right...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on December 14, 2008
great poem


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