This is so beautifully written, Bonnie. A little sad but tinged with humor. Each one of us have a unique way of coming to terms with reality. It maybe difficult for some, but it is better to learn the hard way than not not learning at all. Simply beautiful.
What a wonderful story...and Dr Suess sparked my love for reading and rhyming!
Many would think that the things done to them as children, the hurtful things, they as adults would not do to their own children or others as they first hand know how it feels.
Bonnie, your poems are healing balm for the spirit, and a childrens book of them for parents to read at bedtime would be a gift for them
and worth the purchase.
WOW Bonnie, your poem really hit home with me, and I was on the other end of my dads belt, one too many times. Thank you for such a deep and insightful write. Hoping your new year is a blessed one.
I am now working on my new children's book.......on page 6 now.
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
I love this one, Bonnie, and the anti-abuse message it conveys. I deal with abused people and a big part of their problem is that they do tend to become abusers, themselves, for the very reason stated in your poem.
There is one line which has the phrase "...she heard her father’s voice..." which would work best with "...Father's..." or maybe "...Father's Voice..." to synchronize your reader's focus immediately.
The resolution stressed (let go and let God) is the best of all possible solutions. It works every time for those who have the faith to seek their Father's Voice, which always leaves the frustration of how we may influence those who do NOT have any such faith. Ah well, that's when the Serenity Prayer comes into play :-)
The cycle, continues far too often these days: thank God that young woman came to her senses and stopped it in its tracks. Powerfully penned lesson, Bonnie, well done.
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Love & peace be with you
William
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Karen
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Sheri
FANTASTIC!! Your style of poetry is SUPERB!!
LOve and Hugs,
Lance
Many would think that the things done to them as children, the hurtful things, they as adults would not do to their own children or others as they first hand know how it feels.
A good moral to this poem, Bonnie! This is a keeper! Its going in my library!
Blessings and love,
~Linda
and worth the purchase.
Eileen
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I am now working on my new children's book.......on page 6 now.
There is one line which has the phrase "...she heard her father’s voice..." which would work best with "...Father's..." or maybe "...Father's Voice..." to synchronize your reader's focus immediately.
The resolution stressed (let go and let God) is the best of all possible solutions. It works every time for those who have the faith to seek their Father's Voice, which always leaves the frustration of how we may influence those who do NOT have any such faith. Ah well, that's when the Serenity Prayer comes into play :-)
Ted
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.