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Seeing Past the Obvious
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Seeing Past the Obvious

It happened, again that moment before sleep,
when ghostly hands snatched
the cord of awareness. Then nothing,
until catapulted into a wall of dull ragged gray.

Crumpled amongst the ruins, inhaling dust,
weary I gazed and saw tattered furniture
abandoned in haste. On one wall a tapestry hung
from ceiling to floor, embroidered with rich colors
of red and gold, dying in muted hues.

I rummaged room to room in wonderment.
Entering the front porch, there nestled
between two white-washed rocking chairs,
was a dilapidated cardboard box.
Curiosity filled my gaze with boyhood trinkets.

Then I saw them, the man, wife and boy,
stand there watching me with benevolence.
Raw emotions yoked my eyes.
The more I cried, the more the child smiled.

Trembling violently with sorrow
sleep surrendered to an awakening notion;
I am that child,
reborn from the ashes of burnt yesterdays.


Copyright © 2004 Tracey L. Hardie
 


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 Reviews of "Seeing Past the Obvious "
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2004
Excellent write, Tracie. This poem flows seamlessly, and conveys vivid images; it is very powerful.

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on May 5, 2004
excellent, evocative and earnest

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 5, 2004
Powerful write Tracey!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 4, 2004
Tracey,

Food for thought! Quintessential prose most certain!

Robert

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2004
PROFOUND write, Tracey!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 4, 2004
sad but true...excellent!!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Got me with this one.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Very nice. Love the ending!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Very deeply felt emotions in this precious gem , Tracey!
Your words were beautifully crafted,with vivid images!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Tracey,

Very powerful and vivid write, which you have penned so eloquently. Kept me hanging onto every word. Fantastic art work too!!

I am reading your poetry,
Thomas

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Tracie this is sad and dark and you capture it
so welll.....
I always miss you!!!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Compelling write Tracey, I love your work and I've missed you.


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