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Thorns of Deceit
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Thorns of Deceit

With the hands of distant enemies
dreams once conceived
were shredded by thorns of deceit.

Yesterday’s forged declarations
bellowed anguished cries
that traveled vast boundaries.

Remembrance of what was,
what should have been,
languished thoughts invaded reality.

Through a maze of destruction
with a lantern of hope
relinquished beliefs vanquished.


Copyright 2001 Tracey L. Hardie


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Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Poignant, powerful writing...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
beautifully expressed poem with fine clarity of subject...excellent write Tracey

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
very powerful...to the point! well said!

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
relinquished beliefs vanquished
kinda like dreams up in smoke
man wish i could think like you
josie

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
nice read from here in the maze of destruction

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Tracey,
I am in agreement with everyone, relationships with the wrong one can cause so much damage. It is a domino effect, but if we really want, we can pick the "important" domino back up again! :o)

Maria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Enjoyed this Tracey, emotional but so soft in its delivery.

Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
OK, who's the prick?

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Tracey,
Very nice write here. Deciet is a wicked tool that shreds the fabric of trust.
Drkman

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Tracey-moving poem. The picture is stark and adds to this piece..breath-cutting.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
Tracey,
Excellent write of pain and
broken relationships.
Peg

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2002
The lies of others can be prickley little bast.... i guess that is where they get there name from


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