Master's Plan (poem) by Mitzi Kay Jackson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 15, 2007

Such a sensous poem ! Wow ........M

Reviewed on January 13, 2007

The depth of emotion, hope, and dedication runs so deep through MASTER'S PLAN that it approaches the sacred. Wonderful work with telling undertones of significant sociopolitical elements.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on January 11, 2007

BREATHTAKING

Reviewed by Afrika Abney

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

This is a deep piece full of imagery, strength and color. Well done.

Afrika Midnight Asha Abney

Reviewed by Robert Harrison (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

My first read of you poetry young lady. You have another tracker.

Robert

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

Powerfully emotive and meaningful, Mitzi. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Hi, Mitzi. I'd like to put a link to this over at Kings and Kindreds. :-) And I think that's enough to let you know what I think of the poem. LOL. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

A very beautiful and emotional
poetic view of thoughts your poem is filled
With a sadness that is just so heartfelt
And I can feel your loss sometimes we make plans but
God decides what is right for us
He has set a path for each and everyone of us to fallow!
Excellent Imagery And Flow very sad and the
Page is filled with painful emotions!!
Love And peace to You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Sad, but true, Mitz.

The master's plan ain't ours, but it's what's to be.

Ron

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Very nice and an interesting view of thought, one who cradles the thought of another yet the rain upon a picnic from which the created master's plan has fallen...very nice

enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on January 6, 2007

Keep the lines coming, they are as piercing as they are convicting. Thanks.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

Awesome energy in this poem. It is a plea for the greatest black man to return and pick up where things left off...the sun will shine again, Mitzi and inside that picnic basket is a neatly folded red and white checkerboard tablecloth, fried chicken, potato salad, bread, cheese and wine for two...Blessed Be.

Sage

Reviewed by Tichaona Chinyelu

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

Sis, the ending of this was just lovely. I could relate to this whole piece but the ending, it has that twist of knowledge and word play, that I love most about writing.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

Dear Mitzi,
Biggest love and care to you sista!!
So happy to have crossed your humble, love surrendering path!
All the love you need is abundant inside of you!!
Shine on beautiful soul!
Love and friendship
Suzie xoxo :-D

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

Mitzi,

Very emotional, sad and such beautiful write

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Rain Down On Our Picnic,i.e.There's No Master Plan Only Plan You Got Involved In-I Think You're Pretty & Pretty Smart To NO IT DOES TAKE 2 To Tango-Huh! He Gave You FREEDOM OF CHOICE-FREE WILL...

Whole Idea Is Not To Look Back Only In Justice Of Revenge You Been Wronged-Even In Love You Just Can't Get Enough Of (Greed) You Want More Sex...So If You Don't Hang On To The Rope (God) Threw Out You As I Simply Hang Yourself In The (Lasso) Loop..

This Is Good Write On--Let's Face It (God) Ain't No Saint Either He's Just As Guilty In His Own Eyes Of Bumbled Creation-Be Satan Devil...

TRASK

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Beautiful! :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Mitzi!!!!!!! I've been wondering where you've been...I see you haven't lost your edge, this is beautifully inspiring poetry, well done!

(((((HUGS)))), love and prayer, Karla. *Happy New Year!*

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

oh my but you do write with flair lady poet...this like so much of your work is powerful and very very real. Love the imagery in this.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Powerful write that draws the reader into the heart of the events in these people's lives.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

So very well written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Maryella Vause

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Wow! I love your depth and passion! That's what a poem should do for a reader--stir and express.

Also, I like the graphic--how did you upload it?

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

I dig the way you always
tell it like it is.
Happy 2007!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

the mystery is who the master is...if the plan is rain then it's a negative plan...should be no saint, right? i really enjoyed this one although the reader is left a bit confused...thanks a lot for sharing

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

This is sad but so real in tone and writing! I like the photograph.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

This is so very touching; so loving and yet, at the same time, so sad. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

pqwerful write--the photo is also powerfyl and beautiful

Reviewed by Walter Jones

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

So well you reach out to the plight of living, and being a part of the culture, sharing the soul, marking the edge, a reflection, a truth, growing more than time and space, a rest spot, for words and thought.. Walt

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Oh my so deep,Happy New Year....Hugsssssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Extremely powerful, and extremely sad, Mitzi - and quite a poem.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

A deep emotional write expressed with the candor of a loving heart.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Mitzi, this is so well-expressed. I love the raw emotions in this one.

Happy New Year to you and your family!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Deeply passsionate and painful write from the heart of a caring woman who though proud of her man also is somewhat angry at him or perhaps the life that took him from her. As always Mitzi you keep it real.

Fee

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on January 4, 2007

Mitzi this is so filled with a sadness that is just not funny. I can feel your loss, and the anger. I can hear your crying and see your tears. I can also feel your despair, and your love for the child that you cradle in your arms. The killing isn't right, and never will be. The Master's plan is different for each one of us, because each one of us is unique. Stay strong Mitzi, because it is in our strength that we can heal.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little den sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."