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Mom
by Melanie Votaw → (All Poetry by Melanie Votaw)
Friday, September 9, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I’ve taken to gently stroking her head,

A strange reversal.

What do they say about the elderly returning to childhood?

I sit with her.

We don’t talk much.

Her words lose their way on the long arduous journey

From mind to mouth.

Her hand attempts to rise toward her face,

But her body says, “No, you cannot scratch.”

She lowers her hand in resigned defeat,

And I watch her mind disconnect from her body's betrayal.

Her skin becomes someone else’s skin,

Her senses are no longer friendly.

The surrender is painstaking.

Her implosion is like watching someone double over in slow motion.

Each day, she becomes smaller and smaller and smaller within her body,

Preparing to leave it.

 


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Reviewed by Melanie Votaw
Reviewed on September 11, 2016
Thanks to those who have commented so far. My mother had Parkinson's Disease and some related dementia. She always knew who I was, but she lost almost all function of her body. It's a horrible disease.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 11, 2016
The sad case of dementia or Alzheimer's syndrome. I witnessed it with my grandmother, but I lived far away and only visited her twice during her five-year journey from articulate to welcome death. You have shared with us the intimate detail of watching your mother waste away in a painful way from what I gather. Hopefully, a breakthrough will help those with these problems so that they can live a full life up until their dying day.

Fortunately, my Mom, wracked with a number of debilitating problems that are taking their toll at 92, still has a strong will and her mind to deal with things like being nearly deaf. She calls me every Monday from a thousand miles away to talk with me on her TTY. She finds it too inconvenient for me to call her.

Ron

Reviewed by Valerie Wingate
Reviewed on September 11, 2016
...I will never forget the saddest truths your poetry remembers so well. It's also followed by a smile that lingers in the love MOM quietly plants in your heart!

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 10, 2016
Very touching.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 9, 2016
You gave a very good account of the deterioration of the flesh. I hope I will be able to not go through that. I'm preparing to go a different route.


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