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Twisted Tendrils
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It’s okay, the man said.  It’s okay,
little miss.  Living doll, know that?
Here, let me help you.  See that
big, fat, shiny grape  way  up
high?  Give me your hand
and I will help you reach. . .there
you go.  You are going to love
the taste.  Just like sugar.
Don’t worry, it isn’t dirty.  Here,
put it in your mouth.  Good,
isn’t it?   Let’s pick some more
from that bunch that is right over
your pretty little head.  See?
Eyes so big.  Hair so soft.  Let me
touch it one more time.  There, there.
. . .
Later, she touched a purple spot
at the top of her leg.   The first  
of several beginning with twisted
offers dangled by men who wanted
to help.  All had something she needed
to give.  Something very good, she
should be grateful.   The fruit
the grape man dangled was in a clump
that hung from crisscrossed strips
of unpainted wood over her 5-year-old
head.  Bumps on the  path he made tripped,
and a splinter dug real  deep.  Later,
the sun burned through.  Burned spots
into her eyes,  but she saw  dirt hair
clung to the blubber back of his neck.  
Teeth had gaped when she clambered
over the fence, starving for something,
or someone, sweet.   She had followed
her nose because she wanted to  know
what an arbor looked like.   Bunch
of twisted vines.  No thorns, but you bleed.
 
 
                 (c) Phyllis Jean Green,  April, 2007
                  
 

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 Reviews of "Twisted Tendrils"
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on May 5, 2007
You have a way of drawing the reader into the plot so to allow him/her to expirience the deceit, the shift from joy to pain and in the end leave us in awe -- utterly speechless. Great piece of work, Pea.

Carmen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 28, 2007
you've captured such pain in a quite eloquent poem ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
Touches deeply. Great write.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
Awe, now this one tears my heart out...such a sad feeling about this write. I, as the other have read, and read again. A sad write that is all too often true for many children across this land!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
Sad but powerfully true and I agree with others, this one is to be read and reread for the obvious methaphor may not be what you the artist propose. Pain and sadness seem to be prevailant but so is desire to be accepted even if it is not right. Very good Pea

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
The pain within this one touched the hollow part of my being!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 26, 2007

Unique and intriguing... "Twisted Tendrils" makes one think. It is one that demands more than one reading.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
have re-read this several times
and the feeling of a sadness and pain
Keeps coming through,
So I will do as...Reg
I will read over wanting to be "sure"
Well expressed and very powerful message!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend....Morning Star


Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
The imagery in this is so explicit, unwashed metaphor is so powerful the grapes shrivel to not make them so attractive and eye-catching, say sour grapes, cuz they are, ya know...love you, Pea...

Sage

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Great write......

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
painful and heard rending-pain like this is forever present

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
I felt the senses in this one,innocence and pain. Great write.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
An interesting write, a sensual write, yet a very sad, depressing, hurtful write. Did enjoy reading this, but soemwhere there is a hidden message. Thank you.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Heartbreaking pain in verse, Pea; quite different from you. Excellent write; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
This is certainly worthy of much more than a single reading, Pea. I think I know that of which it expresses but, wanting to be "sure" if I can, I must read again and... ...again. Powerful and engaging write. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on April 25, 2007
(((awww, Pea))),

This one hurts. Lingering pain in heartbreaking lines...very powerfully penned sadness. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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