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Define Home and From
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           Define Home and From
 
"What is your hometown?"  Quailing
senseless, right?  Standard cocktail party
fare.  Got your cheese straws, got your
leering staggerer, got no place to sit,
got the same old tired Where-from.
Cough up the state, fine.  Even bristle
at "Illi-noise."  But all those moves!
Walls still shift.  Bridges, signs.
Still, the same state, prior escape via
milk train at 17.  Memory sepias feed-
littered square and creep-free alleys
great for kick the can and making holly-
hock dolls.  Certain park in a certain
city solaced for a time.  My mother
and father had grown up thinking Memphis
was the be-all-and-end-all. Let down, they
went for broke: Wild and Wooly Nawth!
Damn-yankees never, but we are already
pretending.  Catch your deaths, kin drawl.
Who needs black ice and cold shoulder?
"Write you from U-ville.  'B'baa."  Four
semesters later, baby, sheepskin and hard
times land them in wind-torn, gang-
smelling Gargantua.  But first a shot of
Fedora, stiff beside Ladies Cloth Coat,
Damaged.  Frost-clouded lips,  box-shaped
car. Toddler's all snowsuit, mittens, and
eyes.   Clanking, spitting, radiators and  
hard-frozen drifts soon lead to cornbelted
river "burg."  Inside,  battles.  Outside,
a shining river hums.  Pink and yellow
posies path to curlicued bandstand.   
Banks beg to be sledded,  hills to be
climbed. Walks to school and drifting
summers stretch time and space.  Until
a July divorce spins losing parties to a
walk-up by tracks in a cow-town that
being made capitol made too big for her
britches.  But just look.  Silver maples
lace fingers with elms.  Black walnuts, blue
spruces, Jack-in-the-Beanstalk  tall pines.  
That one's a pin oak, someone said.  Got
walks to run, rain and shine.  Hiding park
with echoing gazebos and ducks wearing
rings now emerald, now cobalt.    Lucky,
snag a ride to the  lake.  Last apartment a  
hole, but high school's a hop, skip, and jump
by alley.  Great for slipping to deserted
to lunch on bottled Coke and Lucky Strikes.
All under the bridge.  Dead or flew coop.
Next  question?  Now I got one for you.
Is it okay to  mix hometowns?  Shake or stir
into a martini?  Just a thought.  Where
have those stuffed mushrooms gotten off
to?   Do any of you know?


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 Reviews of "Define Home and From"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 25, 2009
Yes. Mixing and learning therefrom is definitely good. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on July 21, 2009
Wonderful flow with a heady mix of intellect and emotion.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
it is not only permissible, it is unavoidable to mix, shake or stir hometowns and martinis -- for they form the blend that is our day to day existence, our memories, our perceptions, our expectations -- I love the creativity of this work Phyllis Jean -- an interesting read --interesting perspectives shared -- a grounding work -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
excellent indeed-i enjoyed reading!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
Excellent write
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
Though you speak of so much that has passed before, I somehow found a note of humor in all of it. Life is an uphill climb that takes us to the glorious freedom of the top of the mountain and a knowledge of self that is both rewarding and uplifting. It all does really boil down to the mushrooms, anyway, doesn't it? I loved this rolling tribute to life lessons learned and the significance as well as the insignificance of it all.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Hi Phyllis, :-),I enjoy reading this well written piece.take care of yourself

EDWIN

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
....creative,interesting, makes one ponder....great write Pea
Christine

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
There are lots of things going on in this poem to reflect your title. Sounds like a whole life of memories.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
I can't answer the last question dear sweetpea.
Great write, like snippets of imagery
or cinematic vignettes. Enjoyed muchly.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Like the rambling yet interconnected flow of this one as if you are walking down a path and letting your thoughts out one at a time. Very nicely done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed on July 10, 2009
All this from one question, Where you from? LOL Wow. Undone becasue you must be in my head! Lately, I've been sooooo homesick for my hometown of Ontario, Ohio - really hate it here in Texas. When people ask me where I'm from, I almost always say, Ohio. Not Texas. Been like that for twenty six years ... I miss the seasons; snow; Cedar Point; basements. Especially basements. LOL Here in Texas, they have bugs big enough to ride on; storms; heat; more heat; illegals who won't learn English (and yet they expect ME to learn Spanish). UGH. Don't like it here. Can't afford to move. Karen and I BOTH ready to move, and the sooner, the better. An excellent write, and sorry got off on a tangent - all that from one simple question, "What is your hometown?" LOL Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Excellent writing as always sweet lady....have a wonderful and safe day..Hugss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
You got me when talking of gazebos, we had one among the trees, a secret palace where we rescued princesses and slain dragons, were we got our first kiss perhaps...yes...how we define home...as just one tuny little place full of memories of just a house?

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
Excellent write, Phyllis.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
WOW THIS GREAT...THERE IS NO COMPARING THE CONTENTMENT OF HOME AND THE DISCONTENT OF AN ADOPTED ONE...AND THEN GOING BACK HOME AND FINDING HOME...AND YOU...HAVE CHANGED. WELL WRITTEN FULL OF THE WONDERFUL PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT MAKE THIS ONE ENJOYABLE WRITE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE, HIS INSPIRATIONS


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