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Too slow ?
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Too slow, too slow
 the turtles go,
too slow for man to fear,
too slow, too slow
 to even know,
the universe is here.
Too slow to hate and ravage,
too slow to know 'the plot,'
too slow to trash the forests,
too slow to smash the lot.
Too slow to think 'life is a bore.'
too slow to instigate a war.
A bit too slow for cunning guile,
much too slow to fake a smile.
Too slow to wonder why they're here,
too slow to wish we'd disappear.
Too slow to ooze religion
(for which men kill to claim ,)
too slow to know that skin can show,
which group to hate and blame.
Too slow, too slow
the turtles go,
I wish mankind did too,
but we're too fast
to ever last,
this fact, I know- is true .

 

     

 

     


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 Reviews of "Too slow ?"
Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on November 9, 2011
I like the way you think! A down-to-earth poem about preferring the slow pace of life instead of the crazy fast lane most people live in. I agree wholeheartedly! The lyrical flow of your poem lulls one into accepting the slowness of the tortoise as opposed to the rapid beat of the hare.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed on August 13, 2006
Oh Kay, this is wonderful, excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Superb piece Kay this is spot on, right up my apocalyptic street.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2006
Outstanding write...
I wouldn't mind being a turtle...
but-0oops..here comes a big car...
Love ya!
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2006
Dear Kay,

The tortoise seems to have evolved more favourably than humankind. Bless You for your spiritual wisdom.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 31, 2006
I have to very definitely agree with Mz Eileen, this is really a great way to put this one...I wish I wrote it too, but I know I am not as talented as you are herein...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on July 31, 2006
Kay, this is definatly one of your best yet, it is abslutely brilliant,
Your Pommie Pal Steve

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 31, 2006
What a brilliant brain you have Kay Fantastic metaphor, wish I wrote it;-)This to me is perfection!

Love you,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 31, 2006
Sad but so very true my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 31, 2006
I think it's very sadly true, too. And I've often wondered what it must feel like to be a very wise old tortoise.

Reviewed on July 31, 2006
the tortoise go,
I wish mankind did too,
but we're too fast

Man moves fast like a horse to the direction of war while moves too slow like a tortoise to the direction of peace.
Fantastic poem of truth in the nature of mankind


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