Act of Love (poem) by D. L. Vegas on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 26, 2013

Word economy goes a long way in a poem, particularly of the sensuous kind.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2013

Wow, Deborah, I've missed reading your writing...which is growing by leaps and bounds, as are the number and weight of your wonderful reviews. Do you have stretch marks from all of this? Great poem! ~~ Diana

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2013

sizzle
simmer
meld
murmur
hold
hold
smolder
smooth
release

...(pardon my knee-jerk reaction)...

...your words match imagery into flame!!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 9, 2013

Leaves this reader breathless...beautifully crafted poetry, Deborah...

Anna

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on July 9, 2013

wonderful passion felt in these words
budd

Reviewed by Christine Volkoff (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2013

You have an incredible knack for this almost haiku-like way of saying so much in so few words! Amazing.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

Full of your high
spirits *Deborah*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

A woman's lips always intrigued me.

George

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

Lovely! By the way, I have a Pastry Chef friend in Chicago. The name of his business is "Lips Like Sugar"!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

Succinct, descriptive, and yet breath-taking!

Peace,

Dayvid

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

Works for heteroes, too!

Ron

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

image & poem is
sensually delishious
...suga-lips & dipp'n sauce
Vickie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 8, 2013

Ohhhh . . . It absolutely does not get any better than this . . .