I wonder why you had used "she" "her" (third person) to describe her in you first 3 stanza's; but then on your last 3 stanza's you've switched to referring to "you" (second person). Perhaps I'm missing something in this poem. Anyway...please forgive me if I had offended you. Sometimes I don't understand.
I wonder what a woman with closets full of clothes, purses, and shoes thinks about that. But then, you are no ordinary woman. Why does she have to wear perfume at all?
If she didn't know before, after reading this she certainly will. This is pointedly direct without trying to insert ambiguous words. This is honest, straight to the point poetry.
‘I have to go back soon,’ says Adam one afternoon. Yes, I know he has to go back soon. He has to go back to London and to his job and his apprenticeship. He has taken the maximum number of days leave – he has taken his entire Summer holiday in the Sp
Just a simple gathering of the Gay & Lesbian Activist Association of New Birch and Sipsboror (GLAABS) and we plunge down a hilarious ride to perdition.
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Lady Vivian
Anna
I wonder why you had used "she" "her" (third person) to describe her in you first 3 stanza's; but then on your last 3 stanza's you've switched to referring to "you" (second person). Perhaps I'm missing something in this poem. Anyway...please forgive me if I had offended you. Sometimes I don't understand.
Sandie Angel :o)
Ron
budd
Love ya!
Jane