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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Our Own Version

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Some might argue creating is only as good as its audience. Others would say the ethos of creating is for its own sake.

Friday, April 5, 2013


Poem Artwork
Our Own Version

Like atoms awaiting attraction
my story
meets your story
my vibration touches yours

How mysterious
this connection
Poets wonder
Painters know
Composers smile

Expression wanders
perfecting its purpose
like magnetic storms
seeking to ground
thunderous announcement

Brush strokes
conjoin innate harmony
counterpoint
searches layered melodies
romantic evolves impressionistic
classical meets jazz
jazz fuses blues and pop
poetry finds paper
paper indulges ink
words thrust images
images invite vision
vision paints limited dimension
aspect births sculpture
and further imagination...

Yet

Our own consciousness
is all that counts
whether artist or witness

Such magic
this empowered creativity
a threat to the weak
a subtle touch for the strong

Temperance nurtures epiphany
this delicate cracking of dawn
a sudden glimpse
the light
the space
a threshold stepped over

Our own version


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on April 6, 2013
No truer words have been shared.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 6, 2013
You are absolutely real. Everyone writes his or her own version. When I read some, it's an aversion. When I read others, it's an immersion. And for still others, it's an emancipation.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on April 6, 2013
I grock, to use an obsolete futuristic term.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 5, 2013
yes, yes, yes bravo
budd


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