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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Shimmering Holograms

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Whether it be a love, business or political relationship, many would argue that the integrity of same is rapidly becoming endangered, destined for future museums as mere technological reflections of what was once real.

Sunday, October 6, 2013


Poem Artwork
Shimmering Holograms
by Odin Roark

The relationships hang in space
Levitating as impressive images
Once of consequence
Now void of substance

How very long the translucent layers built
Molding beginnings of meaningful passion
That withdrew slowly into tortoise-like armor
Each with accumulated secrets
Festering

Time passed
More betrayals amassed
Expanding beyond the flesh
Finances
Business
Family
All thought hidden beneath
The hardened shell of deceit

Underlying this make-believe shield
Continued these foolish human beings
Doing foolish things
All the while
Knowing the counterbalance to foolishness
Was compassion they had denied themselves
Each convinced forgiveness undeserved
As if it must be earned
Rather than given from the heart

What endured
Were fractured remnants
Scattered light beams of living
Mirroring the past three-dimensional commitment
Into these shimmering holograms
Of what once was real

Thank you

Our next galactic tour is in 40 centons



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Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 8, 2013
Yes it has all changed and not necessarily for the better as some things have gone mundane and robotic as if instinctual without full understanding of its genesis Our Creator intended something else than what we have become. Excellent expression.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 8, 2013
A truly sad and powerful piece.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
~Odin~
Quite revealing the counterbalance.
Galactic scattered light beams of living.
Enjoyed.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
Along with compassion denied, so was passion, tied up in the tortoise shell of deceit… tied up so neat, so complete. You have described the anal mentality of life under examination very well.

Got a kick out of that last line… Where can I get a ticket!

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
much to think about when reading these lines
budd

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on October 6, 2013
The same words will be used, but with different connotations, a stray bit of prismatic light shooting off and to the right. Love mounted by the moose head or displayed in video exhibit? Perhaps to be captured in poetic refrain. M.True

Reviewed on October 6, 2013
the last line is probably more true than you know! change or forgiveness. The two are very interrelated and connected. There is a lot to see in this poem!


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