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Just Around the Bend...

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As the holiday celebrating appreciation appears again, some will ponder often inordinate and limited ways to say thank you.

Saturday, November 16, 2013


Poem Artwork
Just Around the Bend…
by Odin Roark

Make-believe knows
Hand in hand
Guardian and child
Never ceases to be
As words meet words
Sentences find paragraphs
Pages turn new discovery
Begetting chapter upon chapter
And then…

Often faith’s endurance knows no end
Like a turkey too numb
To know its head is gone
Or a truck forever stuck in relentless mud

Even the mind’s conscience ratchets its continuous drone
Long past heart’s flickering pictures
Have jumped off sprocket
Coiling images’ remains upon a floor
Always willing to catch the fallen
Knowing restarting is always possible

Yet

In the house
That might have been a home
The phone continues to ring off the hook
Like a metronome gone berserk
Bent on satiating rhythm’s appetite
Past the inevitable wind down

With eyes closed…

Survival holds firm one’s make-believe castle
The house now empty
Save for whispers from the past
Knowing well the drafts of loneliness
Shiver the drifting dust
Becoming the only skin left to touch

Unknowingly
The residual past
Moves through unneeded locks
Once securing doors leading to
Now forgotten passions of privacy
Images rendered blind
By keyhole mockery

Remaining…

The heart’s keyboard
Once delivering its voice of hope and trust
Now accelerating words no longer noticed
Meaning hurtling past yesterday and tomorrow
Like a bullet train screeching off its rails
Ricocheting off walls once holding secure
Now speeding toward a boarded-up station
Once of hourly expectation
A platform crowded with promise
Giving back a passing ghostly blur

So travel hearts in linguistic search
Myth-makers pursuing beautiful language
Knowing delivery never guarantees
Anyone waiting to hear the words
Save perhaps the make-believe child
Walking hand in hand
Believing along with the writer
That just around the bend…
   


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Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 18, 2013
we should be thankful the year round i agree
budd

Reviewed on November 17, 2013
The written word, art, music being one way to highlight the heaven on earth and scorn the hell . A shame to think being thankful once a year will cut it . Seize the day, seek the beauty in it all. Appreciate the thoughts in this.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on November 17, 2013
Life is but a dream... Building visions is never as easy as it may seem. The eyes of the innocent always seeing the clearest. "A platform crowded with promise/ Giving back a passing ghostly blur" my favorite image... M.True

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 17, 2013
It's as if past, present, and future all came rushing by in a kaleidoscope of sound, and colors, and words...and then in the fading contrails of kicked up dust, there still remains that childlike expectation of something new and different yet to come. One helluva ride!

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on November 17, 2013
Powerful and rich in metaphor!
The myth makers need to explain why Santa only visits the rich kids.
Indeed, always the perpetual promise of - Jam tomorrow!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 17, 2013
Just around the bend - something most of us believe in most of our lives.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 16, 2013
This one had me mesmerized with its relentless push the words be obvious and of everything strived for and lost in the mist of old age when the child comes back to remember what it was like to have those first experiences under the guidance of a held hand.

You have a way of raising emotion with just words.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 16, 2013
"stuck in relentless mud"

This partial line said it all to me. Someone said, if there was not a god we would have to make up one. Holidays. I maintain we have them to remind ourselves of who we are and each setting of a holiday serves to make us understand where we stand in the world. I have rather gone to dread them, and really don't celebrate them as I used to. As usual Odin, you put the fire under your words and leave the readers thinking they are the lucky ones to have found themselves in the company of greatness.

Reviewed by Shirley Long
Reviewed on November 16, 2013
Your poetry is filled with so much clarity and originality Odin, I
loved this poem and all the many facets of living and life it describes and the verses really make the reader see the clear picture. This is another great write. I enjoyed reading it today.


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