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Scared

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Recently while writing a review for a fellow poet, I stumbled into some metaphoric thought in my experience thesaurus, that part of my consciousness that's hard at times to reflect on.

Saturday, January 25, 2014


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Scared
by Odin Roark

Fear saved the fly
The spider wept

Fear kept men alive
While Napalm paved the way

Fear keeps the 1% insulated
Handlers and mental bodyguards
At their beckon call

The mongrel on Manhattan’s frozen streets
Knows well the virtue of fear

Yet

Never will we see our species
Handle being scared like an animal

Where the lesser evolution will defend
We the sentient superiors will think only offense

How beautiful
How heart wrenching0
The defense elephants
Rhinos
Big cats
Exert to protect only that
Which is their province
Their instinctual responsibility
Wanting not to harm the perp
But only to ward off the aggression
Escape to safer surroundings.

Why does man feel he must instigate aggression
To justify his superiority?
Why do we continue our behavior
Moving science
Technology
Mind set
Ever closer to android resolve?

Might we be so complacently satisfied
We ignore the advances of AI?
Are we really so consumed with the media clap trap
We’re becoming more and more ignorant of information
Vet proof stats that tell us
Wake up

And yet

To sit in a quiet attic
Observe the simple
Yet perfectly designed survival
Instinct of the spider
Is to become aware

It’s all about living in harmony
Not acrimony

Wait patient spider
What you need for another day of survival
Is but waiting

Love nature
Or perish
    


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Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on January 26, 2014
Defense is instinctual, of that I am sure. I believe that the "offensive" is a product of the rational mind. Then again, what do we do with the neighboring village that keeps attacking us? Offense can often be part of a good defense. Harmony sounds so simple and calm. As a practical tool it falls apart when put to the real
world test. "Harmony" may be a product of the rational also. A good read that makes us think Odin. Bob

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 26, 2014
The spider may catch more than she needs to eat and prepare a nest for her eggs, but her net, her territory, is small and fragile, and she must set it every day if she is to survive. As you have so well stated, the human quickly moves from defense of territory to aggression, striking out on the world as though it were his oyster.

Genghis Khan, followed later by Machiavelli, Hitler and the like, have taught us well.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on January 26, 2014
At what point does anxiety become fear? The first compels us to 'plan ahead' and is an essential element of survival. The later causes us to push that fight or flight button, often to destroy the very thing we must protect in order to make life worth living. Clever of you to take the spider's side, the restrained long view. But in the end, isn't it a matter of 'love nature -and perish" ... thanks for keeping my aging mind engaged.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 26, 2014
i so agree with what you have so well written here
budd

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on January 25, 2014
Fear does seem to be our master. From birth we are driven to react to the world as an enemy to be conquered, obstacles to be overcome, barriers to be demolished. We are slaves to this mentality, allowing ourselves to be further influenced by the fresh scents of greed and lust. There will always be those willing to show us the best way to kill the beast. You do well to reveal our scars. M.True

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 25, 2014
Spider Web to your awakening, Odin. I agree. I agree. Flattery, i.e., a fellow poet. We can bleat all we want, human kind will carry on its merry, unjustified way. We! Who have the reasoning power of thinking have given us kerjillion buckets of shed blood. When will it stop? Never. Never!


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