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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

We can’t exercise enough caution to that influence which would have us ignore life's subtleties.

Thursday, March 13, 2014


Poem Artwork
Why?
by Odin Roark

The questioning
The distrust
The skepticism
So time consuming

Ever watch the wonder
Of a child’s focus on a butterfly’s freedom

Ever consider
Your own doubt
Spending such time to consider
Mere ripples in a lake
Where butterflies might pass

Might there be
Simple reason
We are alerted
Asked
Challenged

Oh the sadness

So few react
Dismissing said
As so much distraction

Beware

There is most likely much more
To the simple examples of Nature
Than our conditioned dismissal
Knows
Cares about
Even

Cares to perceive
Let alone
Care about

Damn
So sad




    


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Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on April 1, 2014
Sad but true great write Odin, challenging! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2014
All encompassing are your two words: "conditioned dismissal." This ache of a poem rings crystal clear in my ears. And what a head-shake last two lines. Requiem. Reminds me of the book (made into a movie) The Celestine Prophecy, c.1993 by James Redfield...not the story line as much as a scene in which enlightened human beings seek the vision of plant and animal 'auras' and the intense observation of nature. That scene fits well in my mind with your "Cares to perceive." Your writing contains astonishing displays of 'seeing' and 'caring,' which conveys this splendor to us. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
oh wow, the seventh seal, one of my favorites ... i'd luv to play chess with death ... maybe i could pull a stalemate ...

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
~Odin~
Where butterflies might pass. Nature's focus we shouldn't
wonder too far.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
We do tend to get all wrapped up in our fears and use them to justify all the things that we do, beneficial or not.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
yes so sad
budd


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