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Empty Furnished Room

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Often, trusting spontaneity’s reward bears out the idiom, “the best-laid plans of mice and men go astray.” (Image by wingdobsidian

Wednesday, July 23, 2014


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Empty Furnished Room
by Odin Roark

Tonight
Heavy eyelids succumb to fluttering,
Then rain showers of thought,
Meandering tributaries,
And finally,
A river his heart to forge.

Stepping stone’s precarious words
Laid carefully, affording pathways
Through rushing emotions
To mind's quieter listening banks.

Only yesterday,
Bridges ceased to be,
Mud and leaves merged beneath,
Finding haven as living residue,
Memories of former times,
Now but chaotic currents,
Sweeping out to sea.

Above it all

The timing of sun and moon
Unravels its inevitable tide,
Simple as a fraying tale's net,
Where no amount of tying
Or untying
Can detour
An evolving destiny.

Night remains.

Relief for some,
A merciless river of time for others,
Its clock of darkness meandering downstream,
Allowing daylight numerals to jettison,
As oncoming night hours' accumulate weight,
Anchoring beneath one's pillow.

Here…

Where peace seeks respite,
One’s sleep ebbs and swells like historic hunger
Drifting from memory’s gluttony,
To the jetsam of life’s waste.

Night's soul-captive war
Battles against ether's healing attar,
As time's eternal jasmine,
Whispers the fragrance of resistance.

On occasion,
Morning's all night persuasive bouquet
Assists passage to the other side,
Disarms stubborn locks,
Opens driftwood-laden eyes,
And discovers mind’s home
One’s empty furnished room,
Always anxious to be filled.
   


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 28, 2014
"As oncoming night hours' accumulate weight,
Anchoring beneath one's pillow."

Nice! A river of dreams... M.True

Reviewed on July 24, 2014
It's hard to clear your head at times, sometimes it takes distance and dreams. I am completely intrigued you used smell in this. Lavender is for restful sleep. But jasmine is lovely too. Smell being one of the most powerful triggers of memory.by this piece . I like this piece very much.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 23, 2014
Took me until the end find out that it was an allegory for the mind. A good one.

Ron

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 23, 2014

enjoyed the read, well said

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 23, 2014
Know that Robert Burns quote.
Agree 100% with it too. I used it in BTC's.
In the parlance it reads:
“The best laid schemes o’ mice an’ men, gang aft agley,
an’ lea’e us nought but grief an’ pain for promis’d joy.”
Some unique imagery in this, Kent.
Was drawn to:
"Opens driftwood-laden eyes," and
"Battles against ether's healing attar"... I can personally attest to the ardent healing available when one can take in the real fragrance of that fifth and highest element beyond water fire earth and air.

Enjoyed. Well done...



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