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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Trial of a Teardrop Revisited

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Written after seeing the head of my muse atop her pillow, staring out, buried tears being quashed, and my contemplation of what unexpressed tears must go through. (Image by Brookncole)

Thursday, September 11, 2014


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Trial of a Teardrop Revisited
by Odin Roark

How guarded we stand
To protect our buried teardrops,
Wanting out from imprisoned feelings,
Desperately battling our adult opposition
For its natural journey to the top.

Reasoning guards its check points.
Rational resistance gives momentary pause,
as confused muscles await the exchange
before molten passions reignite its fire.

Rushing toward liberation,
calm and peace await as
strength’s shuttered windows collapse,
eruptive laughter weeps,
and grievance finds celebration.

Such is the journey of one’s teardrop,
the perpetual child in us all,
forever rekindling fires of our innocence.
 
 


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 26, 2014
The element of judgement has traditionally fallen on the male of the species. To assume it is of a child-like nature belies the social stigma. M.True

Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on September 16, 2014
Amazing insight into a tearful situation that brings tears to my eyes even reaind this poetry.

Reviewed on September 12, 2014
The worst kind of tear.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 12, 2014
While you have described suppressed tears, I would challenge anyone who thinks they can hold tears back when the right emotion hits. I can't, and I don't think anyone else can either.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 12, 2014
The journey of one's teardrops - fascinating premise.


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