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· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

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· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

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Winged Lessons

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Man thinks he’s the only one that can understand other creatures, being sentient and all, but…what if the creatures got some smarts going for them as well?

Saturday, December 13, 2014


Poem Artwork
Winged Lessons
by Odin Roark

Sitting astride his backpack,
A roadside nomadic looked up from his book.
The sun oppressing,
The sand distressing,
The bird noise progressing.

“From where came your right
To straddle fence wire and incessantly complain
With pompous cawing at a resting traveler,
As if he didn’t belong?

Who made you judge and jury for speeding cars
Trying to avoid your missile-like whitewash
As they chase setting suns
And see me only as a roadside shadow?

What do you know of windblown highway ditches as nightly shelter,
Or roadside memorials of white-cross remembrances,
All kinds of lives suddenly stopped?

Rather than making all that commotion,
Wouldn’t you be better off listening a little more,
Enjoying the fluttering quiet of those beautiful black-opal wings,
As you swoop in on sign posts and rusted-out abandoned cars?

What’s with your nasty disposition, anyway?
And why aren’t you carrying on like the raven you are,
Instead of the your noisy lessor specie, the crow?

Oh never mind.
Just shove off.
Let me have some peace
While I work through Poe’s take on your gnarly purpose.
Better still, just shut up and listen.”

‘And the raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
And the lamp-light o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted - nevermore!’

“See what I mean…
Maybe this Poe fella is trying to explain
Neither one of us is gonna live forever,
So…”


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Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on December 14, 2014
~Odin~
Beautiful black opal wings ~ magestic this of God's creatures.
Superbly penned dear friend.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 14, 2014
Just finished editing a book where a crow played the part of a spirit of an ancestor, constantly guiding the coming of age of a new beginning. You are right. We give birds and animals little credit for their innate intelligence. But sometimes, they surprise us with their ability to understand us better than we understand ourselves.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 14, 2014
Nicely conceptualized, Odin, and a great image.
"With pompous cawing at a resting traveler,
As if he didn’t belong?"
Michele and I have colorful and layered experience in this area. Birds (Ravens, Hawks, Falcons, Eagles, Owls) have always played a mysterious role in our lives; especially in the areas verging on the meta-physical. I have come to understand a Raven's vociferousness around humans as its desire to communicate and share. At times even offering a portend, to hikers or travelers, of what may be approaching on the near horizon.
Blessings of peace and wisdom to you...

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 14, 2014
c'est magnifique!

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 14, 2014
Odin,

Excellent! I could see the crow in my mind and see the shadow ever menacing.

Love and blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 14, 2014
Poe's Raven is one of my favorites - and I like listening to both ravens and crows talk - they often make more sense than some people I know do.

PS: The 115th Annual Christmas Bird Count starts today, and I'll be out counting birds.


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