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Remembering Elevator Men

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With today’s passing of Harper Lee, I thought about the southern era of “To Kill a Mockingbird” and other elements of ‘30’s history that have also passed, or are reaching that time. With so few cage elevators still in existence anywhere in the south, hopefully we’ll not forget their often-historical institutional importance and especially their always-unique operators.

Friday, February 19, 2016


Poem Artwork
Remembering Elevator Men
by Odin Roark

Wrinkled hands
rotate time's worn handle of half circles,
giving arrest to past rides awakened.

Up and down,
listening,
hearing,
never forgetting.

Watch your step…

Ornate iron confinement,
charming for youth,
insulation for some,
sentencing for others.

Cables retch echoing secrets within,
sliding metal dregs past elevated remembrances
among whispered conspiracies,
softly spoken nothings,
muffled weeping,
all preambles shadowed
in corners of illusive passage.

Momentary respite
gradually gives way to silent whimpers of fear,
as passengers await floor-stops,
fortune,
reward,
love,
regret.

Eyes rise,
arcing brass arrow above
waves wisdom's index finger
past floors of reverie,
and invisible floor thirteen,
as elevator men provide
continued days of filigree fantasies
to satiate passenger expectations…

for the moment, anyway.
 


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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 19, 2016
Yep, I've ridden many an elevator in my time, but it has been many, many years since I have, at least the kind who had an elevator man working it. Even yesterday I rode an elevator to the third floor of the hospital where I had an appointment. Truthfully I would have thought the Elevator Man has ceased to exist years ago. They sure had a mystic about them for sure. Nice of you to memorialize them in this very nice poem, Odin.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 19, 2016
Yes, I remember, wrinkled hands and all, the passing of time, customs, culture. Your poem is evocative of things as they pass into oblivion, a way of life and culture that once bound people together. Now we are all distanced from each other, even if we can communicate at the speed of light. Now that you have immortalized the dying breed of elevator man, you will have to move onto the telephone operator, who used to greet us when we picked up the phone with the phrase "What number, please." Wisdom's index finger should touch her head in remembrance as well before we bid them all goodbye.

John


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