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Felliniesque Parade

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Picturing one's life at any age is but a series of parading vignettes…some with joyful high strutting legs, others with tragicomedy’s reality waving from a floating stage of fading dreams. (Image Fellini’s Les Clowns)

Monday, March 7, 2016


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Felliniesque Parade
by Odin Roark

At one’s boulevard of dreams,
exhilaration starts.

High step strutting beside imagined fife and drum,
avenues of sun-drenched colors
amidst waving flags
pave the way,
Sousa driven ambition begins marching.

So many dreams there are
at such a young age.

Quantity of anything seems large,
especially inside one's head,
that tiny room where imaginary musings
create adventures into worlds unknown.

Stimulation rules.

Air untainted.

Sky without clouds.

Roads ahead clear.

A journey patiently waiting.

All for the taking.

What overflowing reward,
one's unquestioning direction
abiding venturesome side streets,
the off-grid wanderings,
past grass and tree,
beyond flowers and winged escort,
unexplored mindscapes
spreading toward the ever receding horizon
where more forks beckon more visions
ignoring sanity's precipitous cliffs.

Even as one momentarily arrests the flight,
veering to the right,
swerving to the left,
pausing at the shoulder,
squeezing tenure tighter,
accepting passage no longer under cloudless skies,
no longer simple survival,
one's tiny fantasy room fading.

Even then…

Limited time never seems urgent until it is,
affording no respite to reflect,
to feed the pigeons,
sway amidst the waves of wheat,
enjoy one last lager.

For there's little leisure
when the next generation
longs to parade as well,
pushing and shoving from the rear,
while aging stumbles forward,
dragging what is left of exhausted dreams
into destiny's finis.

How adventuresome life’s parade remains,
even when knowing the final peek
into one’s shrinking realm of dreams
may be close at hand,
that ancient moment when imagination’s cycle
of bold risk once began.

The jester in us all knows…

Everyone deserves a Felliniesque parade,
before conformity’s fever takes hold.
 


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Reviewed on March 8, 2016
I've recently completed the following eight lines:
". . . If they, proceeding this way,
Could be said to have succeeded,
Then we all are also successful;
If they cannot be pronounced good,
None can succeed either.
This is what being-in-body,
At large, makes with all of us,
As a whole and integral Dharma."
We should remember that the realm of grand ancestors plays in all this a great part. Cheers, alex


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 8, 2016
Another view of life's passages. This time you focused on daydreams of glory that young people have been trying to carry out, perhaps after being asked the question, "What do you want to be when you grow up?"

And then you get into the reality of trying to make that dream happen and how, eventually, however one gets toward that dream it seems to be gradually pushed aside by the eager ambition of the dreams of younger folks coming up from behind.

Always insightful, forever prodding thought, your poems inspire and ask us, the reader to think deeper about what we are doing.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 8, 2016
By and large, you are right, many have "off-grid wanderings" thru "unexplored mindscapes". I have preferred another way and tend to follow what Thoreau identifies in one of his essays: "At every step I see it . . . . It is no single inscription on a single rock, but a footprint or rather a mindprint left everywhere and altogether illegible." He was apparently on the "trail of mind". When he saw footprints of the mind (mindprints), they reminded him that the subtle spirit that made them was not far off. John


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