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Fly-Casting Stars

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

When staring at the ceiling, we sometimes forget how valuable our often upside down nighttime perspective aids our everyday fantasies. (Image by dreamstime)

Saturday, September 30, 2017


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Fly-Casting Stars

Once the boy made fly hooks
after school for ten cents a hook.
Big money then
for big dreams... then.

Now the boy, a vintage man,
has only nocturnal dreams
needing little money... now.

How prescient he thinks,
staring up at ceiling images,
casting his line out into the dark,
like hooks needing to catch new dreams,
the ones swimming freely for the taking,
his heart the willing bait.

Night after night,
his inner feelings a tether,
floats beyond his past
until unknown stars
blink their infinite welcome.

His spirit takes heed,
the line reeled out to its end,
the hook’s purposeful drift
bringing a sigh to his throat.

Up there,
the stars, like other fishermen of providence,
pepper his longing with their inherent sparkle,
like the surface of a great lake reflecting its surroundings,
an invitation to join in their celestial campfire,
allow the embers and flames to ignite dreams never waned,
even when often flickering of dim flame.

Is it the pumping heart that keeps operative
the lure that makes the pull-in so rewarding,
the catch and release so needed
in keeping alive the dreams?

It’s late…

His eyes flutter,
as the hook, now a dangling shadow in the abyss,
finds respite ‘til another night.

A perplexed moth and spider,
gaze down from the ceiling.
The man recedes into sleep.
A mystical abandonment enveloping
his smiling eyelids.


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Reviewed on October 2, 2017
I can just picture everything so vividly as I read this. Great story! Fine imagery used for the reader to "see".

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 1, 2017
Those memories are sweeter with age. You can reel them in and relive them. And then release them so that they will grow and come back even larger than they were before.

On a television game show in my hometown, I received the prize of a fly tying kit. Although I was an avid fisherman with artificial lures and a spin cast rod and reel, I didn't have much use for flies and found myself tying very few, very badly. But then, we didn't live in trout country.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 30, 2017
The stars have much to tell us, as you have amply displayed in this amazing poem.


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