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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Departed Time

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Some often make extreme attempts to test their will to live. (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, October 28, 2018


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Departed Time

 

Through the fog of departed time

the store with no name

patiently awaits today’s customers.

 

Cleaned and eternally pressed,

frayed by worn threads of distress and regret

stand the forever clothes of lives now past,

wanting only to make room for your company.

 

Posted at the entrance,

an aged mannequin in black tux

makes ready the door for your arrival,

the entrance you’ve been putting off for years.

 

Like chorus girls auditioning,

clothes hangers adjust their skirts,

positioning their best look.

Pant racks tilt back and forth,

causing ill matching coats to sway in giddy fashion,

tie racks to scramble in upstaging each other,

as retired shoe boxes roused by the ruckus

upset the sleeping shoes

who angrily stomp about

frightening you back onto the street.

 

Your entrance host holds firm,

“Guess this isn't your day,”

as the usual ghostly air of the store

lifts you skyward back toward your perch

atop the ledge and cable.

 

 



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Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on November 3, 2018
Interesting result, good imagery . . .

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 29, 2018
A great metaphor for those who spend their whole life trying but eventually still end up on the shelf or hung out to dry never fully used or appreciated for their talent or their skill.



Ron

Reviewed on October 28, 2018
obviously, some often make extreme attempts to touch their deaths as if they are cats with nine lives, from 1 to 10 and back. a piece about madness of living in the downtown; a greatly penned. cheers, alex

Reviewed on October 28, 2018
A failed suicide? Your imagery is nearly tangible! Fantastic piece, Odin!!

Love ya!

Jane


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