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Innate Totems

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From my novel in-progress, “Occam’s Legacy,” the following is an attempt to create some free verse gist of a conversation between Jared (an adult becoming) and a befriended Native American war vet, Pump. (Sculpture by Bob Clyatt)

Monday, November 19, 2018


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Innate Totems

Can we ever escape
that which we create,
but often choose to ignore or abuse?

Like the mismatched rocks of a cairn,
random choice is not an option,
as complimenting shapes and sizes,
make up one's balance,
one's direction,
one's harmony.

Yet some…

Aspiring high-rise urban dwellers
live a rock, steel, and glass totem life,
stacking mismatched building blocks,
like mutated animal lineage not of the fittest,

but of less than honorable rewards,
unknowingly making unbalanced direction,
even while gasping air to defy their self-made reality.

Might they be destined to realize a primeval demise,
like a surreal incarnation atop modern scaffold
where ghostly burial rites of Great Plains nomadic tribes
wait to watch and weep?

Can primitive wisdom ever penetrate contemporary importance
before the inverted vortex of balance awaiting its tumble
consumes itself atop, or on the way down,

cascading through this rising sectioned silo of ignorance,
distilling the wrongs of misbegotten power
to but crushed kernels of infinity's hourglass?

Such might be the destiny of man's innate totems,
creation’s unique building blocks that make us the species we are,
even as we desperately try to become a delusional species

we were not meant to be.

 

Unless…

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 20, 2018
As I see it: The steel and glass skyscraper as a modern totem is an intriguing notion. Considering that the traditional totem symbolizes guardian spirits, or helpers, and each of the animals, images, or symbols exhibited have special and specific meanings, I can certainly envision a kind of parallel with modern applications to tenants of high rises. Each tenant in a specific place (their apartments) and each a symbol of something they've chosen to embrace or be. I will think more on this later (I'm at work) and try and develop something original from it. Thought-provoking, Odin. Always appreciate having my brain invigorated. Regards... r

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on November 20, 2018
Ambitious, Odin. Both character-types are too often given straight-line insights and 'mystical' powers ... perhaps some roundabout humor could make them notable. I'm thinking of the old myth from natives around this area who believe that a bug floating on his back downriver with mighty erection forced the creation of the world ... good luck ...


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