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Thread Thin Security

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Some of our important lessons derived from the lesser creatures go unattended until… (Image by Jobson)

Tuesday, September 3, 2019


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Thread Thin Security


Twisted desires spin endlessly from our species,
Neither destination nor affixing important.
Like a mountain of miscreant spiders
Struck immobile by anomalous gluttony.

 
They neither advance or retreat,

Just feed.

Such a large portion of humanoid go-to mindset,
Where ravenous cravings, blind eye and mind alike,
Making feel-good choices,
But with carefree flinging of tinsel threads,
Foolishly trusting anchor will be found.

Such folly not even the meager independent spider would trust,
For it knows of direction,
Structure,
Symmetry,
And connecting,

As the always necessary focus to survive.

One might do well to gaze upon the patient arachnid,
Where lessons learned many centuries past
Continue to serve both shelter and nourishment well,
Their web of security coexisting with nature,
Giving little attention to man’s covetous-spangled weaving,
Thriving on its eight-legged-three-hundred-million-year-old wisdom,
Knowing full well man’s tinsel thread pursuits,
Will but wait out the loss of its glitter,
Collapse and become
Tomorrow’s dust,
Taking up residence beside yesterday’s other vanished species.


 



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Reviewed on September 4, 2019
Your last line sums it up well, Odin! Very true! That web is the arachnid's life. It has no other function except survival. Life. Its super power.......PATIENCE! Great lesson here.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 4, 2019
It's there for all to see, but to many are caught in webs of deception.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 4, 2019
A nice parable between the spiders' webs and our lack of safety nets. But you touched on some other aspects of survival. One of the imperatives of survival is to feast while there is plenty so that one can survive during the times of want. But as far back as 1968, Paul Ehrlich, who studied the rise and fall of insect populations (I'm not sure whether he studied spiders) wrote The Population Bomb, the first warning that world human population was getting out of hand.

So it is a two edge sword: First, our numbers continue to grow, even though the onslaught on our lands is too great as we have more and more people (and so many unwilling to plan births). And second, our insatiable expectation for more and more exotic as we ravish their earth for our glutton wantonness of growing proportions. Better, more, and most.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 4, 2019
Indeed there is much to learn from the animal world with its
"three-hundred-million-year-old wisdom", but do we have the capacity to learn or will be just "take up residence beside yesterday's other vanished species." A good point that may well come true.


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