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Juncture

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Perhaps to make mistakes is the only way to find joy's forever lingering presence. (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, December 12, 2021


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Juncture

Is there a juncture
You have been waiting for all your life,
That special moment?

Transcendence knows well
The drip of ice,
The fragrance of gardenia,
The modulation of Brubeck,
The splattering genius of Pollock.

How spacious the choice.
How reluctant the pursuit.
Dread knows well
Our fending off possibilities.

Yet…

Somewhere inward,
Everyone knows the key,
Hesitant perhaps.


After all,
Few look forward to the unknown.

But…

At some point,
When all else fails,
When stuff,
Glory,
And money is lost,
Love’s starvation is accepted,
Senses awaken.

Like the moment our child-ness
First touches a rose petal,
Only to marvel at the color,
The aroma,
The horn-stemmed protection,
The willingness to embrace it all.

Such is the juncture,
So remote to most,
Beyond one’s once cherished innocence.

For working the system,
For avoiding the challenge,
For unknowingly urging the missteps
That once were foreign to your inherent child,

Fear now enters as consolation prize.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 13, 2021
That last line is disconcerting. As I read, I thought about all of my peak experiences, too many to even write about. But now, when they return like smelling the roses, they are familiar and may even be comparative to my experience long ago. A comfort while my body tends to give me challenges and pain. But my dreams are still wild in my sleep so solid I forget that I did.

So far, no fear of the unknown. I guess I will face that when I get that diagnosis. Like when my neurosurgeon said, "You will be your bedridden within 10 years [1971]." Overcoming our fear is perhaps our highest calling.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on December 12, 2021
This delivers. I like the conveyance of dissemination, aroma, music notes, paint flicks, and melting into water. Contents of dread and fear and avoiding the challenge, in your poetry couples well with the caption of the image: the idea that very small children have little fear and dread, instead have eagerness in the wonder even from mistakes. The way you wrapped it up with the last line is a solid smack of truth, pointing back to not looking forward to the unknown. My favorite lines are: “Love’s starvation is accepted,/Senses awaken. I also like how you use the single word to transition from stanza to stanza. That is a style I find really ‘works,’ ~~ djl


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