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Critical Spirit

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There comes a time in everyone’s life when the closing of the eyes and the relaxing of the body into sleep reveals magical elements of one’s protected journey. Some call that the moment of critical spirit.

Sunday, September 4, 2022


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Critical Spirit

 

How divergent the mysteries of faith

Aware that one goes to sleep

Trusting the dawn will come

That nocturnal friendship

Engages many known

And unknown

Personages.

 

To abandon one’s critical spirit

Is to leave behind

The purity of a dewy relief

Irrigating yet greater arteries of sustenance

Languid at times

Rushing other moments

But always finding

Where it’s ultimately needed.

 

How grateful this ocean of relief

Embracing living’s essence

The sharing of days that often are dark

And evening slumbers that are often lit with tears of joy.

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 6, 2022
"Critical spirit" is a phrase usually associated with an obsessive attitude of criticism and fault-finding. Only the writer knows the specifics of why he chose to use this phrase in context. Betrayal and abandonment can cause such a reaction. R.

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on September 5, 2022
your writings are surely intriguing, and I agree with faith, if only we can work for that stuff or buy it online. but hey, no, one has to have it developed. and i'll look forward to this moment of critical Spirit in one of lucid dreams. thank you for this wonderful piece.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 5, 2022
I haven't heard of the term either, but I gather from your poem that it means a letting go of the tension that builds up during the day and you can better analyze what's happening to you before you sleep.

I go to sleep at least 10 times every night and generally don't remember anything about it except that during the times I sleep I find myself running through my mind something that happened recently that I either improve on or find fault with… Actually very critically analyzing. But near wake up time, quite often, it synthesizes into some kind of wild dream for my muse and stories.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 5, 2022
Critical spirit, never heard the term as such, but I find it interesting intriguing. Yes, these moments between wakefulness and sleep are critical as is the life of the spirit that continues to live throughout the night in our dreams.

Reviewed on September 4, 2022
Truly beautiful and wise, Odin.


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