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To Be Adrift

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Whether in business or personal life, to feel anchorless, to know that one’s feet are not planted securely, mighrt be to anticipate being caught in a never-ending vortex of wonderment, a seeking of freedom from yesterday’s captivity.

Thursday, August 17, 2023


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To Be Adrift

 

How perplexing

He thought

From waist-deep in relations

To a boat-like flotation

Knowing one’s engine could be started again

He chose to let the tides carry him where they wanted

 

To be adrift

He thought

Was not a sad state

Rather it was a chance

At uninterrupted solitude

Afloat atop the tides of

Unpredictability

Where deep fathoms

Of clashing motion

Muffled by the depth and weight

Of determination

Was part of the darkness beneath him

The sightless and silent array of disturbing currents

Swelling to the gravitational pull of Natures sufferance

A distortion of forces subject to diurnal temperature changes

The cyclical changes of Man’s fear of power out of his control

 

Yes…

 

To maintain a flotation above the chaos and turmoil

Is to chance finding sold ground of worth

A footing that is void of another’s control.

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 19, 2023
It certainly helps to be able, in the maelstream of life, to let go and go along with the flow. Both the image and your prosetry carry out that theme I like to think of from a poster I once had featuring the Beatles from their song, "Relax, and float downstream." Something I often find helps me release the tension of ordinary life. But in your case, I believe you're actually talking about totally changing one's lifestyle. Cool.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 18, 2023
Juxtaposing floating above all the presently ensuing chaos and being grounded is perfectly understandable to me. Third person works too. It allows the reader to make a personal connection with the writer, or a more casual connection with someone the writer is writing about. We're starting to prepare for an impending hurricane here in SoCal. Amazing what's happening on this planet. This is (in ways) reminiscent of the freak San Diego hurricane of 1858. Thanks for sharing my friend. Related and enjoyed. r

Reviewed on August 17, 2023
Oh, you are "talking my language", Odin! I've thought many times of grabbing a train ticket to "Whosville" and just getting off somewhere and getting a room, not telling anhyone where I was. What fun!! I truly enjoyed this piece!

Love ya!

Jane


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