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Barbed Disguises

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Not long ago, franchised hope cycled periodically, but always with more fervor every four years in November. Today, we're down to being a part of global cycles in every month’s crisis of moral, mental, and physical health. (Image by Schritt.)

Monday, October 23, 2023


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Barbed Disguises


Habituation eased into town long ago.

Thought to be natural,
It was.
Praised as stability,
It was.
Embraced as destiny,
It was.


Procreation ruled the nights,
delivery-rooms the days.

Time passed and like flies to a sugar fix,
habituation swarmed bank tellers on payday,
local bars on Friday night,
churches on Sunday.

Workweek habits continued.

Harassment ‘round the water cooler.
Ass kissing ‘round the bosses.
Entitlement ‘round the calling-in-sick phone.

Then something happened.

Times got rough.
Unemployment rose.
Businesses shut down.
Preachers sought donations elsewhere.
Habituation stumbled out of town.

Dark became the memories of enticements.
Cobwebs hung furtively,
Tying unlit lamp posts to shattered neon signs.
Side streets to alleyways.
Locked doors to broken windows.

Summer storms passed over
Leaving muddy puddles,
Their rippled reflections
But gurgling echoes to the moon.

Goodbye waves of regret

Today…

Not far down the road,
A new infestation of impassioned hunters
Polish their duplicitous wings,
Awaiting yet another bounty of ignorance
To buy into the inducement.

Of both flight and fright.
Believing this.
Believing that.
Unaware that allurement
is a barb of many disguises.

Just as on a clear night,
Or a dew-covered sunrise,
Wings of abalone color
Will flicker from the webs of
Habituation's seductive lure,
Turning tomorrow’s entrapment of dreams,
Like the captive wings of flies,
Into fractured rainbows fleeing.

Is it not sad to see rainbow colors running scared?

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 23, 2023
A seldom-explored theme astutely executed in this poem, the art of habituation and what it can really mean to humanity. Love your final thought, a question no less.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 23, 2023
This one gave me chills. It was that strikingly written. I believe you were describing change. For habitation is a human handiwork. Something we don't have to think about, just do. But with the opening of the World Wide Web and the encyclopedia on our cell phones, things are changing and changing to rapidly for many who want to go back to their habitual ways.

Alvin Toffler called it "future shock" back in the 1970s and it's more evident than ever today.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on October 23, 2023
A sad reflection on the worst of humanity's weakness.
"Time passed and like flies to a sugar fix,
habituation swarmed bank tellers on payday,
local bars on Friday night,
churches on Sunday."
Very succinctly said, as a grievous fall from what could be...what should be: Lives of meaning wrestled through enduring realities toward a greater good.
I pray that tomorrow—today even—for some, at least, rainbows offer hope-filled vision.
Blessings, Odin.


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