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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Battles of Wordsmith Warriors

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Having recently reached a milestone in the book’s readership and reviews, I’m thinking back over the 8 years immersed in word-hell, and many iterations, having Echosis finally published was both a relief and a bit of discomfort. I think I "finished" it, but even after years since its publication, lingering in the back of my mind is, "Did I actually finish it or did I just abandon it?" It is arguable that the question of finishing any piece of writing might be unanswerable. For as most of us know, the war of words never ends, even as battles occasionally deliver victory. (Image by Odin Roark)

Friday, November 10, 2023


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 Battles of Wordsmith Warriors 



Amidst a darkened ether, 
determined sparks from tired eyes 
emit lightning thrusts, 
collapsing pages into heaps, 
words forever committed to 
understandings in free-fall.


Patience holds fast 
against Opinion's quicksand, 
Belief's trip wires 
cautious that Conceit's trap 
lurks in the shadows. 

Lesser conflicts fought with honorable intentions 
recede, forgotten now, 
mindful of battles lost and 
wars yet to be fought. 

Ink upon the clearing spreads rapidly 
even as tendrils of enemy efforts remain coiled 
hidden beneath unctuous praises 
ready to ambush, 
prepared to spring open 
today's bombardment 
of Distraction's artillery. 

Sprint we must 
across Error's mine-laden fields, 
seeking not escape amid the commonality, 
but respite among the enlightened. 

Flooded by Tenacity's blood, 
Mind's drenched landscape 
bids calm passage beyond, 
rising through windswept memories, 
lifting spirits above seductive doubts. 

Evacuating Words cry forth tears 
hopefully satiating Reader-needs with resolve. 

And then… 

The next battle awaits a wordsmith warrior to pick up the pen.

 



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Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on November 11, 2023
Echosis still lingers in my mind...so you're right; a good novel is never completely done. It's ever being fashioned in the mind anew. Life changes us, so as our perspectives change—sunrise to sunset of a sun that never moves—we comprehend powerfully sensitive stories in fresh shades of light. As long as hearts beat, authors are a work in progress as much as their books.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 10, 2023
Concerning a poem or a novel never being completed, just abandoned, I agree wholeheartedly. Actually, I've held to that very notion for decades. I've proven it to myself over and over again through the years. And that's the best teacher IMO - your own experiences. I've found that you can always go back and improve on everything you've ever written. And in certain instances, I have. Thanx 4 sharing. r


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