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Teardrop Imprisonment

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

When one thinks about it, tears of laughter can be argued as an oxymoron as well as a useful double entendre when attempting to express the love/hate irony of innocence. (Sculpture by Richard Hudson)

Thursday, January 18, 2024


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Teardrop Imprisonment

 

 

How guarded we stand
to protect our buried teardrops
wanting out from imprisoned feelings,
desperately battling our reservation
for its natural journey to the top.

 

Reasoning guards its checkpoints,
rational resistance gives momentary pause
to confused muscles awaiting the exchange
before molten passions reignite resting fire.

 

Rushing toward liberation,
calm and peace await as
strength's shuttered windows collapse,
eruptive laughter weeps
and grievance finds celebration.

 

Such is the unjust restraint often put upon a teardrop,
expression of the perpetual child in us all,
forever keeping alive

the rekindling of fire from the embers

of our innocence.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 18, 2024
So true. We can't really "imprison" teardrops. They come, happy or sad.

My own experience with happy tears as an example.

As I lay alone in my hospital bed paralyzed that late December, 1963, carolers came to the door and sang out in the hall and then moved on. I was so moved by their singing and so happy that I was alive to hear it, I started crying for the first time since I restrained my crying when I was a kid.

Just after, my sister's high school girlfriend popped in the room and saw me crying. She turned around to leave, but I called her back and tried to tell her I was crying because I was happy, not sad. We talked. I don't believe I ever saw her again after that one time in the hospital.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on January 18, 2024
Beautiful! The completion of experiences and fulfillment of life's dualities plays out so well here. I love how you resolve the paradox of opposites with the last refrain, such a positive outlook. Thanks for sharing, Odin.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 18, 2024
Tears of joy, tears of grief. This theme would make a good Mirror Poem. "The love/hate irony of innocence" you suggest. I remember quite well, the playgrounds of my youth (in Chicago) were certainly not about innocence. I guess the irony (for me) was there were ruffians, rowdies, bullies, sociopaths, and a whole new generation of burgeoning psychotics filled prenatally with undiluted hatred that shed tears too. I've told you this recently: Shedding tears for me is like breathing. Tears have the capacity to heal as they flow. They become the noble language of the eye, and also, often the poetic words that I cannot write. Interesting thoughts. Thanks for sharing.


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