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Elegy in Two Parts

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

When it is so easy after a loss to indulge in self-pity, it is also the time to accept and move on. (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, September 14, 2024


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 (ELEGY IN TWO PARTS)

 

Loss

 

In the hushed aftermath,

 where memories of sorrow linger,

we find ourselves poised

 on the edge of what was,

and what could be.

 

The weight of loss,

a heavy cloak draped over shoulders,

once strong,

 now weary.

 

Yet, in the stillness,

 a breath of hope,

a softness begins to stir.

 

We gather the fragments

 of shattered dreams,

and piece by piece,

 we rebuild.

 

Not as we were,

 but as we are becoming,

 stronger in our fragility,

braver in our fear.

 

The past,

a shadow of gentle smoke

 that dances its ending,

 but does not define the path ahead.

 

With each step,

we honor the pain

and embrace the promise

 of new beginnings.

 

Might it be…

 

That in the heart’s resilience

 lies the power to heal,

 to rise from the ashes,

 and to move forward into the light

because it can?

 

 

Part Two

 

Often we bemoan an ending, unaware that something very new is about to happen.  (Image by Odin AI)

 

 

 

 

Endings Hearken Beginnings

 

 

In the quiet moments after the storm has passed,

we stand at the crossroads, of endings and beginnings.

 

The echoes of shared laughter, now memories

 whispering through the halls of a once vibrant home.

 

Hands that once held tight, now release,

letting go of what was, to embrace what will be.

 

In the space between loss and renewal,

we find ourselves redefining who we are.

 

The end, a door closing, but also a window

 opening to new horizons and uncharted paths.

 

We carry the lessons etched in our hearts,

and with each step forward, we honor the journey.

 

For in every ending lies the seed of a beginning,

 a chance to grow, to heal, to transform.

 

We rise from the ashes, not as we were,

 but as we are becoming.

 

Stronger.

 

Wiser.

 

Free.

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on September 15, 2024
Effective artistry with the AI. It carries reverence, with the pyre, with the folded hands and posture. Both Parts I and II resound with recovery, while defining the pain; and that encouragement is painted with light in your words that Phoenix our human ability to turn towards redefining ourselves. This optimism affords us (or maybe just me) a chance to re-mourn as well, because in looking at what (who) we had to release (lose), we see again of what/who it was we are letting go. I haven’t yet arrived at your last word here: “Free.” And in some cases a sad memory is like, in ‘Brokeback Mountain,’ where Ennis pulls Jack’s shirt to his face…never wanting that scent to dissipate. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 14, 2024
Both parts seem quite similar to me. Finding grief and loss when a loved one disappears for whatever reason, the most disheartening, death. And then gradually merging the past with the present situation and coming out stronger and better prepared for the future, either alone or with others in their new beginning.

I believe the children this happens the better. We don't have to burn our bridges. But we should burn our sorrows may be holding us back from a bright new future ahead.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 14, 2024
Sincerely expressed. Sounds like a good direction to go in. "We gather the fragments of shattered dreams, and piece by piece, we rebuild." It's so important that we learn from our mistakes and failures, so as not to repeat them. "Stronger, wiser, free" is far better than older, weaker, and disillusioned. I imagine too that one would have to be very careful about what fragments they gathered from the ashes of their past in the process of rebuilding. Wouldn't want too much of the old self to remain. Truth be told: if I were to bump into my old self, I'm certain I would be quite anxious to get out of his company. I wish the writer well. Peace.... r


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