The Good Girl (poem) by Angel Hughes on AuthorsDen

The Good Girl
by Angel Hughes → (All Poetry by Angel Hughes)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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The view through someone elses eyes about your style.
Good Girl Huh… maybe let’s see She Classic like white on a summer day Burnt orange leafs blown in autumn from trees Greener than grass blowing in the bellow of the breeze Innocent by the eyes Big and brown But there’s more to be seen Straight by lines with the clear dimensions seeping up underneath Graceful in character because she wasn’t taught another way Become poison by her words Hanging on to what she say Distinct like Jasmine Separating her from the crowd Unlike any other girl Something’s different Certified unique Voice softly spoken Ego-in loud Profile Stylist with favor…..Chic Lingering taste can’t go away Forever etched in the back of their mind Dripping in air like honey from bees What happens in the hide? Nothing more than autonomous supreme Listed only by perfection Dictionaries define she Your good girl What’s good girl The should she Or would girl The desire is strong Beyond the dark but never hood girl Underlying image Taken from a single angle Just enough for the world to see But if you look closely There’s more left in lines for you to read Only for the eyes Of the prized ones Chosen for the need Boys get in line Take a bet On a slow ride Driven always without the keys In plain site Sign reads for viewing pleasure only Driving them crazy Crippling feelings Making em weak Loudly discussed are the reasons for the need To dance with a good girl On her conditions Because its wondered What makes her tic? The secret in the work And what’s significant about her reign? What’s deserving about the title Is there justice to the claim? How to keep the gloss shining On a coat That stays clean Even in rain All the underlying reasons Indescribable answers That keeps good from the focus of the pain AnGel

Reviewed by Amanda Jones

Reviewed on August 6, 2009

I love that, even to this good girl that has all the boys drooling after her to find out what makes her so appetizing, that there are underlying planes which very few get to see.

I've been called a good girl twice or thrice in my life, and that title causes uneasy emotion, and a little pride too. Because the "good girl" has more mystery and value to her than any "hood girl", and she will be the marrying type you bring home to momma.

I love your easy, sometimes rhyming sometimes not, words.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2009

Interesting indeed...Hugssss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 7, 2009

Oh, what is in a title anyway?? Good or bad according to who???? Well written piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Angel,

Very interesting write. After all, what really is a "good girl"?

Mary