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Pitfalls in Life and Little White Lies
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Pitfalls in Life and Little White Lies


 


On cobblestone streets, beneath buttermilk skies,
it's the pitfalls in life and little white lies-
Restrained by dreams, and the fantasies of the muse-
Spiraling out of control; Deadened by excuse


Stairways to Heaven; Sinkholes to Hell,
Angels with wings or Satan's black spell-
The muse it whispers in voices low-
Poets cry out from somewhere below


Lava flows; Peaceful waters flood,
Souls swept away, in rivers of blood-
The muted speaks; The deaf they hear-
and the muse gives name to his every fear


Whimpers and whines; Scrolling pains,
slicing to the bone through swollen veins-
Rejoice; Regress; Reinstate your cause-
Live in the moment; Feel the world pause


Moans and groans; The poet died,
The muse thrives on visions supplied-
Tomorrow's words invisible and denied-
for the dreams of the poet; suffocated and dried


On cobblestone streets, beneath buttermilk skies,
it's the pitfalls in life and little white lies


© Lisa Hilbers
5/11/05


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Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
this is a very good one!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Very nice!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Those little white lies are so often spoken to save someone's feelings or to protect ourselves when we did not walk the straight and narrow. They all come back on us at some point and when they do, our house of cards will surely come tumbling down. This is a very emotional and well structured write, Lisa. The rhythm and rhyme are perfection and all is tempered with your uncanny ability for a smooth and graceful delivery.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Lisa, I'm absolutely convinced that you could create poetry out of listings in the phone directory and I would read it eagerly!

You are a master with flow, with unforced, deeply felt rhythm and rhyme. In fact, your ability to rhyme is more like singing. I so admire how you can bring such subject matter to poetry, yet temper it with beauty, which is the essence of your writings. What a marvel you are. katy xox

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Great poem Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Wow this is interesting and has a great depth to it.

Reviewed on May 11, 2005
wow, lisa, this is awesome! excellent work; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Lisa,

Exceptional emotion in this searing write--you've captured how I've felt as of late in ways I can't describe as well as you did. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Nice play on words...enjoyed.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
I realy like this Lisa. Very nice!

Jack

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
This is one of your utmost best Lisa and I love it to pieces. I think this I can apply so easily to myself and the way I have been feeling mentally these days. Great write.
Felix

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
Yep,, and these pitfalls and little white lies can bring one to the brink of what my own poem is about today. Great minds do think alike, they say.


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