AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Valerie Boggess, iJames Harvey, iTodd Cheney, iDeborah Frontiera, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iTerry Vinson, iMaria Rushing, iBrendan O'Brien, iGracie McKeever, iKalikiano Kalei, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· 239 Titles
· 951 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Sep, 2008

Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Jigsaw
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

"One Sun" by Julianza Shavin

Ok, this is a totally inaccessible piece. The important thing is that finally I finished it. And can now banish it out into the ether. Instead of embe dding the meaning in the poem (an idea I've rejected), and instead of explaining it, I'd be curious as to what others see in it. If you've read my work before, esp about my son, or read my bio, maybe you will "get" this. If not, I should work on it. Writing should be, after all, about communication. This poem is, by the way, NOT down on children, boys or girls. Now let's see -- I guess I need to get on the forum. I need to know: is there a way to view all pictures (vs poems) already posted, to avoid duplication? Because I have a special painting for this one, but wonder if I've used it already.


Poem Artwork

              Jigsaw

I have ten surrogate sons,

eight on the one hand

two on the other

eight are girls, two are one

believe me when I say

two full hands there are

if still you're skeptical

sum the scars.


Copyright Julianza Shavin 2008

 

 

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Jigsaw"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
You are a perplexing individual, Juli. I mean that most respectfully. Love and hugs,

Regis

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
Julie, if you're going to make this a guessing game, my guess
is we're look at one son with many sides, many personalities.
Of course, I;m not a good guesser. If I'm any where close, it's
a helluva poem. -gene.


New Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Pieces. . .The Abbeville Ltd Ed. (Out of Circulation) by Cynth'ya Reed

(Self-published. Please contact author directly to order.) Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into  
Member BookAds

The Nature of Life by Deborah Frontiera

NOW AVAILABLE! This book is a limited edition, and copies are hand numbered. It will NOT be available through Amazon or other distributors. You must purchase it directly from the author or from this site. It is hard-back (not the spiral bind seen  
Member BookAds

Contraband Marriage by Tichaona Chinyelu

Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.  
Member BookAds