I agree with Peter. This is good poetry. Succinctly written.
Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2010
You write what you need to write. We read what we need to read. There's no blame or self-pity here. That's where you were today and that's all that matters. As long as it's emotionally true, it's perfect. Period!
The unconditional love is so difficult to lose. Sienna is a beautiful gentle soul, I am truly sorry for your loss. Be as Gentle with yourself as she would be. Carin' Spirit
I am sorry for your loss, Juli. I offer you my sincere sympathy. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Reviewed by Jael Fields (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2010
Of all of the poetic thoughts that could have been expressed about this loving and devoted animal, I have to be honest and say that the title sucks. the poem is is nothingbut an unjustified attempt to wallow in blame and guilt over something that you could not control. You write some great poetry, Julie, but this does not even deserve to share the same sight with your other works.
The most that I can say about this is that I am sorry for your loss of Sienna.
Puffy strays and something happens to make him decide he will never run away again. Judged "Outstanding" at the 2013 Writers Digest SPB Awards. Named among the best in family-friendly media, products and services 2019 by the Mom’s Choice Awards®.
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Peace,
Dayvid
Regis
The most that I can say about this is that I am sorry for your loss of Sienna.