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Ambrosia
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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"Child in Nature," by Amadea (Shavin) Katz, age 10.

I just don't get this. I could have sworn I posted this. So I looked all through my titles to see if I posted under a different title. But I don't see it. Anyway, I was working on it, so decided to add it in. It's actually a hopeful poem. Note the ending. I hope the editor works, because I like to put the copyright really small. Not that anyone's going to claim my stuff as his/her own. I was just told to do it, just not when submitting stuff to magazines or contests. Then it looks too full of hubris, it's said. Anyway, here it is. Does anyone else have trouble centering your stuff once it's in the box? Or ending up with two fonts instead of one font?


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                       AMBROSIA
                          
              “Western wind, when will thou blow,
                  The small rain down can rain?
               Christ! If my love were in my arms,
                   And I in my bed again!”

                         -- Anonymous  


Beyond the lamp-lit room is a plangent rain
rescuing trees from their near-drought dyings
and I ponder the thousands of nights
of our separate sibilant lyings.

The western wind that now does blow
that down this rain may rain
blows not for us --  or too much so
shuttling shuttered pain.

Through colorful rooms we pass and greet
snug from the night's down-pouring
wrapped in un-twined un-twinned dreams
anchored in our unmoorings.

The thirsty grass and withered stalks
exalt the liquid ambrosia                       
while in dry and sighing rooms
we unmake our beds of roses.

Yet the steady mizzle is a stalwart hand
its rhythm a robust reminder
of the numbered thrum of dusks and dawns
which each of us is tendered --

and, easing a bit speaks in treacle tones
as earth's fissures mind their mending --
of hopes like rivers, and down river beds,                  
of the ends of beginnings of endings.

Copyright Julie K. Shavin 2009

   

 


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 Reviews of "Ambrosia"
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
This is incredible writing. Very much enjoyed.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Simply lovely words you have composed, I just love the title and all of what you have done with this. Nicely written, Julianza.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
you have a remarkably unique and thought-inducing style ... you capture a stimulating mood and distinctive juxtaposing of images in this poem ... its philosophical motif is reflective yet universal ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Warm,thick and sweet as love often is and with just a touch of spice...
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
I do believe you are right, this is a wonderful piece and does offer hope to a tired heart and mind...

Be always safe,
Karen


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