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Kacie R Rahm

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Hold Strong
by Kacie R Rahm → (All Poetry by Kacie R Rahm)
  
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Look to he left,
There was a Liquor theft.
Look to the right,
People screaming "Party Tonight!"
Look straight ahead,
Young people getting in bed.
Look behind you,
It's all confirmed true .
Everybody's doing things they shouldn't do,
Drugs, sex, and alcohol, just to name a few.

You're in a minority, by not breaking the law,
Every social activity, you seem to withdraw.
This is a hell,
Trying to repel,
From all who rebel.

You want to get away,
From the pressures displayed,
In the preteen years,
Filled with beers,
Tears.

Would your corruptive friends accept you,
If they knew,
That it was true ,
The things they do,
You subdue,
Away from you?

Hold your breath and walk through the crowd,
Hold your head up and feel proud,
For you don't do what is not allowed,
You stick true to what you vowed.

Keep strong,
And push on,
Because the good life you happened upon,
Will in time give you what you want.


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Copyright ©2002 Kaci Rahm-------This is about the pressures of preteen years and holding strong as best as you can.

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 Reviews of "Hold Strong"
Reviewed on August 6, 2002
keep on fighting for what you believe in, and you will go far, my friend!! luv, your friend in texas, karen lynn. ((((HUGS))))

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
Identify with this to a large extent, good work gurl!

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
Very much enjoyed :) ....... j

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
Good job, Kaci, I like it... HOLD STRONG! :)

Reviewed by D. Enise
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
BRAVO!!!! BRAVO!!!
Exceptional, and so full of youths raw truths!
Very powerful and needed message. "Hold Strong".
Your Voice is indeed, all of what Dream Weaver has said.
Bravo!
~Jen

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
This is exceptional. It's not easy, those pre-teen as well as the teen years. Hold strong to your beliefs, and you will go far hun. You have the talent and the spunk to acconplish anything you set your goals for, and dare to dream...

Reviewed on August 3, 2002
A well-written piece!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$


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