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Headrush
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A silent hush, Is never found. A painful crush, Brings me down. A sudden headrush, My head pounds. Blinded by sin, Deaf from secrets. Looking within, I make no regrets. You can't win, Too many upsets. A wilting flower, Weeps and cries. Devoured, By your lies. Empowered, By your goodbyes. I froze, Fearful. He chose, The cheerful. Nobody knows, Too tearful. Blessings, In disguise. Fly on wings, In the skies. Undiscovered things, Burn my eyes. Blurred vision, This is it. A bad decision, I must admit. Indecision, I won't commit. A silent hush, Is never found. A painful crush, Brings me down. A sudden headrush, My head pounds.

This is my second attempt at a poem that tear timed out. It's not as good:( I have no clue what it's even about. But it all flew through my head. Again, out of curiosity, whats your fave stanza. Mines the first....

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Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Nice write. I agree with you, I like the first.

Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Poems that just flow out are some of the very best I think. You did well here, I have also read through some of your other poems and have enjoyed what I've read. Nice work!
Take care,
Allen

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Definately the first and last (which are identical). Like I said, sometimes the unfinished, is polished and done ;) This was very expressive. Sounds like many of my beginning pieces. Put together nicely. I know what you mean, it just flows from up there (points at head) to down there (points to fingers). Don't try to explain it because you can't ;)

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

i love it all, kaci! thanks for sharing this! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) happy 2003! :)

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