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Blue Circles
by Kacie R Rahm → (All Poetry by Kacie R Rahm)
  
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Two in the morning, I can't sleep.
Infomercials fill the TV, with items so cheap.
I grab up my notebook, and think of what to write,
Before I realize what I'm doing, my pen takes flight.
I start drawing a doodle, without paying attention,
Until I looked down and saw what was my invention.
Blue circles, all over the page.
Must mean something, deep within my rage.
It has some sort of meaning, this drawing I created,
Everything in my life, blue circles were unrelated.
So why?
Must I,
draw blue circles all over the page,
Must mean something, deep within my rage.
I didn't notice, but I kept my pen moving.
I wasn't quite sure, if the thought was improving.
After so many circles, I created a big dot,
I wonder why this doodle remained in thought,
Blue circles all over the page,
Must mean something deep within my rage.
I can't quite figure out, what this sketch implies,
but I'll stop thinking for now, I must rest my eyes.
I put away, the blue circles all over the page,
Still don't know, if it's deep within my rage,
Those blue circles.


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Copyright ©2002 Kaci Rahm-------

I was drawing a thousand blue circles that night, I was trying to tell myself they meant something, but I still can't figure it out....confusion!

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 Reviews of "Blue Circles"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
You are so expressive, Kacie. I can't explain the "blue circles" but I can relate though. I love the harsh honesty of your writes. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Thomas
Reviewed on October 23, 2002
(sarah) this thomas thing is really bugging me! anyhow, kaci, this poem is really cute, i don't know what those darned blue circles mean but i hope its something good!

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on September 9, 2002
Whatever those circles meant, they were obviously a means of focusing your creativity. Us writers are a funny breed. We each have our own methods of bringing out what's inside. Sometimes we don't always understand it, but as long as it works for you why complain? I like this poem.

Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2002
I like poets who write of life at 2:00AM.
Some day those blue circles may make sense, or maybe they will remain one of life's little mysteries. The poetry (in and of itself) remains forever.

Reviewed by Avatar 319 (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2002
U are in transition, not confusion. Isn't it interesting that an awakening of one's self occurs at the oddest of hours. U are blooming & branching out. Very eclectic!!!

Reviewed on September 4, 2002
i don't know what those blue circles mean, kaci, but they must have meant something to you, to keep you awake at night. i sometimes draw or write in the middle of the night because something pops in my head, and i have to get it down on paper (plus my arthritis usually wakes me up, and i also have to take a pill or two to ease the pain!). good write, kaci!! love, and ((HUGS)), your friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 4, 2002
maybe the center circle is your consciousness and the outer ones are your alternative selves... the blue maybe a troubled state...

Reviewed on September 4, 2002
Maybe this was just a way to get rid of the pent up energy that wouldn't allow you to sleep. God works in mysterious ways! Nice poem though. Tim

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2002
Maybe you're going around in circles, Kaci. :)


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