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Qamar A Abbasi

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A dieing wish!
by Qamar A Abbasi → (All Poetry by Qamar A Abbasi)
  
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I am, breathing my last, near the point of death
I will be gone soon as
My eyes are closing
And my body is struggling.
I see a beam of light appearing before me
Calling me to its origin.
I hear people crying in the background
Praying for my well-being.
As the clock keeps ticking
I breathe my last.
I see my body lying dead in the bed
As I depart from it. I see people around it
Crying and mourning.
Leaving this dilemma behind, I keep flying
High enough desperately looking for my mother.

Mother, welcome me to your heaven.


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 Reviews of "A dieing wish!"
Reviewed by Buddy Angel
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
What a very moving write.

Reviewed by Shezray Faisal
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Very sad, and beautiful and haunting...
~Shezz

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2003
Nice flow and very visional

Reviewed by LEZBO
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Lulllllllu that was sooooo sweet. if u were here right now i would give you ah big huggy. and may you ami jaan get the best in the here-after inshallah

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 12, 2003
poignant

Reviewed by Seema
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
It is interesting to notice that all of your poems represent your feelings and love for your mother. This is a great tribute to any mother. Your love for your mother is outstanding. Well done.

Reviewed on March 3, 2003
qamar, this is outstanding! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) to you, qamar! :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2003
Qamar,
This is excellent.
Peg

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
Sometimes we must have faith. Excellent.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
you project into a land few wander... well done!

Reviewed by Fahad
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
doggy thats hot as shit, but i didnt love u i would say ur GAY!!, ahahah, joking. Its off the hook nigga...

Reviewed by Saima
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
Woh qamar! This is deep...sad... wow i dunno what to say...I hope things just get easier for you...Inshallah everything will be fine


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