Among a myriad flowers Swaying to song of wind Your grace is unparalleled Amidst limitless sparkling stars On blue-black darkling ocean Of firmament You outshine all I cannot hold you in my arms Now Across awesome expanse of land and sea It is up to you Close your emerald eyes See my engaging smile Allow yourself to slip Between mystical sheets of dream Feel my impatient kiss Touch your eager lips Come to my dimension Allow me To tend your garden Stoke the fire in your hearth Let me love you As you would have me do
Magical image and magical poem. You have quite a way with words and the imagery is beautiful. You tell a story here...one that draws us in and keeps us entertained...one that keeps us wanting more even after we finish reading the poem. Thanks for sharing.
KINDA SAD BECAUSE THIS SEEMS LIKE ONE LOVELY DREAM AND...IF ONLY...DREAMS LIKE THIS COULD COME TRUE. THE IMAGERY IN THIS PIECE IS JUST MARVELOUS...MUCH ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2010
A very warm and passionate writing, and a lovely distant relationship that causes such beautiful results--eventhough, the longing pains the two of you, it causes flowers to grow profusely.
Sounds like a very special love across a distance and with that kind of emotion, surely the reality has, or will, come to light. Beautifully romantic Reg ... a lovely write for someone special. Hugs, Elizabeth
It is beautiful!!!!!!!! I love this poem!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by jo-ann Registe (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2007
I love this poem alot and also the picture,the part i love the most is from the line which says close your emerald eyes up to the last line and picture the actions with every word. Maybe you can help me out also.
jo-ann
Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Why can't my husband talk like this...lol. I loved it. The poem and the picture went together beautifully.
You have a great gift for writing Love. I was blown away in this poem, excuse me, but swept away. Beautiful thoughts describing perfection in tenderness.
Wow this is beautiful I can
Feel the passion and romance in this outstanding
Write I love the tone so soft and tender
I love the vivid imagery !! awesome write my friend!!
Love And Peace To You...Your Friend Morning Star
Well, all I can say is keep your poetic pen stoked full of passionate words Bro. Regis. And happy Valentine's Day to you (just runnin' 'round the Den looking for poems of love and celebration. Thanks for this. . . even though it's a year old.)
blessin's
cynth'ya
No words to express the beauty in this. Damn you! Am I going to have to go to Canada and beat you upside the head to get you to try a book of these gems?! You have a beautiful gift and it should be shared with more than just who visits the den.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
I am stunned..THIS is perfect!!
saved this one as well...wow!!!!
"impatient kiss"... whooooo.. Regis, those two words paint a vivid and oh, so human mind picture... it seemed like the heart of this urgent, passionate piece. Your erotic phrasings invite emotion, as well as passion. Wonderful. katy xox.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
This is what I call a "Sigh" poem, beautifully romantic and passionate Regis.
Regis,
This is beautiful. Thank you for your message. I have meant no disrespect to you, at all, but I have not been at the Den as much in the last year as I once was, for several reasons and much of the time, all the "free time" I have is just long enough to post something, without having time to sit and read. I've missed your writing, very much. I need about 48 hours in a day now, sometimes.
Take care and I'll get in here when I can.
Peace, Jill
Oh Regis, how did I miss this? I must have been asleep. Such romance, and tenderness...you have one of the sweetest hearts imaginable. This is delightful..."Allow yourself to slip between the mystical sheets of a dream". The imagery is magical my friend...with love and blessings, Michelle
AWESOME with the love and confidence of feelings that are known to be reciprocated and shared. Such tender boldness here which causes the sap to rise, certainly! And celebratory of life as a wholly integrated thing, too, when immersed in a loving and fulfilling relationship - even at a distance. This speaks of an absence that makes the heart grow even fonder! Love this inspired and inspiring poem, Regis, with unique language and a starry-sky clarity that sends a frisson of pleasure all through me: goodness only knows, therefore, what the recipient of this write must be feeling!! And I think this is about the most reviews I have ever seen on one page!! You obviously speak the words that everyone wants to hear!! Bless you and your lady. TY Kate xx
smooth, romantic, well written...wonderful work, Regis
Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2005
Regis this is so stunning the expressions of emotion between admiring lovers is so well established it is awesome. Poetic verses. Thank you for sharing this offering of beauty. And for reading my poem and taking the time.:)
Nila
Hi Reg,
Somehow you were knocked off my list but I'm glad you let me know especially after reading this piece. Who says men cannot write romantic poetry..we can.
It is so good to be back on AD and reviewing the work of talented poets. You are one of the most popular poets here and it is easy to see why. You have superb talent and versatility Regis. This is a beautiful romantic poem filled with yearning and the fire of passion. I love it!
Love and light
May the Lord bless and strengthen you and your
family Regis!
Much Love,
Margaret
this one is very deep. Formidable, très romantique!
Nicole
In Spirit,
Bear
This is a romantic piece with a sensual touch. Beautifully written:) Sheila
What True Love Is Made From Indeed.
Do I dare to ask "******" other name :)
Love & Hugs Vickie
jo-ann
Sandra
Rose
Feel the passion and romance in this outstanding
Write I love the tone so soft and tender
I love the vivid imagery !! awesome write my friend!!
Love And Peace To You...Your Friend Morning Star
blessin's
cynth'ya
Peace~And~Love
Denise
Pat
PS: the french in my irish poem was the (pardon my french kind..hee hee). Thank you, by the way for your comments. ;)
You GO, GUY!!! I can only assume that her 'garden' is that of Eden, from whence all procreation bursts forth?
well done! Mon ami !!! Tom.
saved this one as well...wow!!!!
Vesna:)
:)Sandy
Catherine
Perfection my friend ... a beautifully stunning write - lovely!!
Best wishes,
Robert
This is beautiful. Thank you for your message. I have meant no disrespect to you, at all, but I have not been at the Den as much in the last year as I once was, for several reasons and much of the time, all the "free time" I have is just long enough to post something, without having time to sit and read. I've missed your writing, very much. I need about 48 hours in a day now, sometimes.
Take care and I'll get in here when I can.
Peace, Jill
Your Friend,TRASK
Read Your Messages!
Nila
Yet in it is an image of a distance between two lovers...
"I cannot hold you in my arms
Now
Across awesome expanse of land and sea"
Very touching...
"Allow Love"
An exquisite and powerful write.
Wonderful poem to share, thank you Regis.
Sincerely,
Gwendolyn
Gina
Wonderful masterpiece of love. (As Always :)
Love and peace
Huda
Somehow you were knocked off my list but I'm glad you let me know especially after reading this piece. Who says men cannot write romantic poetry..we can.
cheers,
Felix
Reindeer
Best wishes to you and yours
from
kay
Sandy
An amazing, emotional, BEAUTIFUL composition! BRAVO, mon ami!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Send me some Northern Lights--I hear they're specTACUlar in BC
An outstanding job...
Peace, Carole
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami a texas, karen lynn. :D
paix et amour a toi!
A Sensual beauty my friend.....sighhhh!!
Love Tinka..............sweets
Desirous of someone Reg?
Love, onnie
can't you
Wonderful Feeling, sentiments
and feelings.....liked the pic too!!
take care
Magical write.
John
The picture is really neat
You are Awesome Regis.
Love Tracey xo
WOW !!! this is absoutely exquisite, so much love and sensuality, so masterfully penned Regis. :)
warm hugs
Elga
beautifully written, I love the art too!
Love,Eileen
Take care,
Sherry