Yesterday I did not know Mirajolie Yesterday's world is alien To me Now Mirajolie Lives in me Like the most addictive drug The prettiest woe The most pleasurable pain I am not that young Though I feel like a child Now Mirajolie has given me back My youth Makes me feel Like throwing caution To the clouds And the moon Tonight is brighter than ever And Mirajolie's eyes Gently burn my soul I cannot even write a poem Worthy of her worth I feel like a fool Mirajolie You have made me Truly see me
i just get this feeling of being overtaken with gratitude and awe of a lover, that's what i imagine when i read this. "like the most addictive drug". at one point i actually thought it was a drug.
I really liked this one, Regis. To quote Surfside Johnny...."A new girl is like a freshly waxed surfboard - really fast and a bigger rush. Just keep the wax handy for when she starts to slow down."
A wonderful tribute to love and the way a person does truely get inside ones head! Don't laugh but I married my highschool sweetie and this month we celebrate our 37th anniversary. That man got into my head and is still there and I love the way he makes me feel! Even today in many ways he still makes me feel like a child sitting on the edge of the universe, preparing to explore it with him.
As Mari says, the name is a quality in itself resonating "miracle" and "mirage" and, of course, "jolie" which says it all.
And I, too, can resonate with the incredible and tender illusion and reality it expresses.
this was absolutely beautiful!! the graphic combined with your words make this very wistful and romantic...funny how being in love can make someone feel like a child, probably because it makes you vulnerable in a way nothing else can :) enjoyed this
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
a true 'twin' if ever there was one..enjoy dear friend..enjoy!'I'd like to see you write a poem re the connection..hmm..how about it?
At times it is not words that can express our most inner thoughts, desires, emotions and feelings, but a simple hello, and a warm tender hug express so much more than a thousand words strung together. May your Mirajolie burn forever bright in your soul, and in so doing, allow you the ability to express beauty as you have done in this gem. Beautiful poetry Regis.
Reg is ALIVE! Now that's what life and Love is All about!! Throw caution to the clouds and enjoy every ounce of all the senses. Carefree. The lightheartedness of a child. The Innocence of Love! Awwwwwww I am envious in all so many ways. Wonderful and Beautiful Poem more than worthy of Mirajoli. No fool are you to be feeling Young and Alive! Awwwww Regis! I'm smiling for you!!!!
and love that cute picture! Enjoy it and may this feeling last for ever more!!!!!
Love Tracey xoox
Reg - is happy which makes me happy!! : ) \_______/ ( :
i am afraid of those who make me see me....yet yearn for them to come into my life.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2005
"the prettiest woe"... Oh, my goodness, Regis! I quote only one line, yet, in truth, from the first word to the last this one has touched me personally.
The expressive lines are unique, though its universal message rests in the hearts of all who write from the soul. This is a poem that nestled and felt familiar. Your writing gives it a spark.
... and she don't see no fool, that's for sure...!! Exquisite celebration of this glorious "spirit" once again, Regis, and you have captivated her into our hearts as well as your own here. You must be melting her away with your writes: can feel the "love you so much it hurts"-thing here - like how I remember as a child wanting to squeeze the life out of the puppy I held close to my chest... come to think of it, I kinda feel like this now - so good job you are further away than arm's length!!! :)))) Go you - and fly-hi Mirajolie!! LOL Kate xx
Thank you for inviting me here! I'm so glad to read this outstanding piece of writing. The picture is AWESOME, and your poem is so inspiring. Thank you for sharing a wonderful poem as this.
A beautiful love poem for someone with a truly lyrical name....lucky woman and I am sure you feel equally blessed. These are the type of poems and expressed feelings we would ALL love to receive! Really lovely tribute.
Dear Regis,
'Mirajolie' sounds musical and the essence of this poem is also musical. It creates a melody in the heart that cannot be equalled by the most heavenly harp. It is authentic and real because love creates such music. I hear it in you.
Beautiful!
With love... Chanti
Hey Regis I'm not sure if Mrajolie is a lover but if she is it sounds like you were hit hard by one of cupid's leftover arrows. Regardless, it's a lovely worh and a sweet taste of the authours passion.
This is such a warm and wonderful write, Regis. I love this poem and I truly love the feeling that you describe. To meet someone new who touches us deep inside is a blessing that should never go unappreciated and uncelebrated. Mirajolie, such a beautiful name.
Take care,
Sherry
Regis your descriptions in this one are fantastic
and match your phrases.Whether reality or fantasy
whatever the source this is divine and I know we'll
be enjoying more like this. I also agree with Mari!;-)
etw
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
There is nothing, ab-so-lutely nuttin' quite like the feeling you have just described. Go with the flow.
I like the before and after image. You caught the feeling of the moment when another person knocks you into a new orbit. Yours happened to be a romantic relationship, but also that can happen when you jump up a notch in some other part of your life thanks to somebody, so the read is real universal. So in that light Sehr gut! Tres bien! Bueno! najauni (Navajo for beautiful)
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Regis, MIRAJOLIE (lovely name btw) is so enchanting. Flows silkily off my tongue when read aloud. It expresses excitement and delight in meeting someone new. I imagine we may be seeing more poetry about Mirajolie. Beautiful wistful writing.
A new relationship can be wonderfully exciting and at the same time, destabilizing, in the best possible way. :) A real feel-good read, left me quite happy for the narrator.
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I truly believe some people are magnetic. They can trigger things in us we never thought possible. A lovely poem. Hugs,
Sheila
-Carrie
Lives in me
Like the most addictive drug
The prettiest woe
lovely indeed :)
pax A
Pat
Ron
And I, too, can resonate with the incredible and tender illusion and reality it expresses.
vesna:)
At times it is not words that can express our most inner thoughts, desires, emotions and feelings, but a simple hello, and a warm tender hug express so much more than a thousand words strung together. May your Mirajolie burn forever bright in your soul, and in so doing, allow you the ability to express beauty as you have done in this gem. Beautiful poetry Regis.
warm hugs
Elga
lovely, Regis...
Gina
Tempo and meter par excellent my friend - superb write!!
Blessings,
Robert
beautiful.........
Love from India - Joel -
Be happy. You deserve it :)!
:)Sandy
Take care
and love that cute picture! Enjoy it and may this feeling last for ever more!!!!!
Love Tracey xoox
Reg - is happy which makes me happy!! : ) \_______/ ( :
The expressive lines are unique, though its universal message rests in the hearts of all who write from the soul. This is a poem that nestled and felt familiar. Your writing gives it a spark.
Wonderful piece! katy xox.
Thank you for inviting me here! I'm so glad to read this outstanding piece of writing. The picture is AWESOME, and your poem is so inspiring. Thank you for sharing a wonderful poem as this.
Lots of love to you,
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Pure magic in your pen...
This is a keeper:)
Love 'n Peace, Linda
You deserve so much of what's good in this life, Regis. A sweet and bliss-filled penning.
You write good wet.
John
I feel your new self, the lightness in your step, the smile in your heart.
ann
If You Must Be Young Then You Need To Look No Further Than Your Own Mind,i.e. IT DOES NOT GROW OLD YOU YOU LET YOURSELF GROW OLD_
I Can't Pain(t) a Bigger Picture For You To See--MIRAJOLIE--YOURSELF!
PS: Only Fools Never Make (Made) Mistakes...
Your Friend,TRASK
'Mirajolie' sounds musical and the essence of this poem is also musical. It creates a melody in the heart that cannot be equalled by the most heavenly harp. It is authentic and real because love creates such music. I hear it in you.
Beautiful!
With love... Chanti
Being in love looks good on you. Marvelous, beautiful write--BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in Texas, Karla. :)
Paul;-]
Love Tinka
Felix
Though I feel like a child
Now
Love can truly transform our essence - in so many different ways.
Take care,
Sherry
Very romantic and beautiful as usual
Great one, regis
Love and peace
and match your phrases.Whether reality or fantasy
whatever the source this is divine and I know we'll
be enjoying more like this. I also agree with Mari!;-)
etw
"The prettiest woe..." I like this line.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D