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| Reviewed by Lark Pogue |
5/6/2013 |
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Wow! I was there. This story does not skip a beat. Every word counts.
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| Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo |
7/28/2011 |
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| Interesting story. Very descriptive. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by J Howard |
7/27/2011 |
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sad, dark and convincing story. life is all about possibilities. how interesting the possibilities that lurk within the "author"
good write-
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| Reviewed by c lea harris |
5/28/2011 |
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| sounds just about right as life would have it. |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
4/29/2011 |
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| An intriguing, dark story, testimony to your skill and power over language. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat |
2/24/2011 |
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Reg,
This was absolutely riveting! Enjoyed the write very much, was with the man all the way to the end.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by karen logan |
12/10/2010 |
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| Regis, this sure made me think. Thank you. Love and light. Karen |
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| Reviewed by Laura Spinella |
9/19/2010 |
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| What an intriguing short story! I read a few of your many posts, but I really liked the description in this one! You're quite versed at putting the reader in the moment! In particular, I like the way it begins. To me, a story is always inviting when the character is missing something that's obivous and immediate to them. It makes me (the reader) want to find out what it is! |
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| Reviewed by Margaret Mullings |
8/23/2010 |
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Oh my goodness Regis....this an excellent write!!!
You are very gifted indeed! God bless and strengthen
you! Be encouraged and keep on writing!
Much Love,
Margaret |
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| Reviewed by Jms Bell |
6/22/2010 |
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RIVETING AND CERTAINLY COMMANDING. I ENJOYED THIS WELL WRITTEN STORY. THANK YOU FOR SHARING AND MUCH LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
6/9/2010 |
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| Richly detailed, gloomy and absolutely grabs you by the throat and doesn't let go. Wow, what a vivid story and the ending causes you to swallow hard. Fantastic write, Regis! ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson |
6/7/2009 |
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| This is a very chilling piece. Curiousity and thirst drives a man away from his sanctuary and hopefully into the arms of salvation, but as the journey comes to an end, all he will find is peace in a dream. Very well-done. |
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| Reviewed by kg cummings |
5/20/2009 |
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| spooky, really spooky that there was no chance of survival... kinda like life as we know it. enjoyed reading this story. Your friend, kathy |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
11/2/2008 |
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whew!! wow this is scary Regis. A very great work. Loved the story
hugs
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| Reviewed by Hatshepsut Maatkare |
10/25/2008 |
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| I love the way your mind works! Great story....absolutely captivating. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
12/13/2007 |
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Regis,
Love the macabre ending! I've had detailed dreams about the end of the world, which I hope never come true in my lifetime. I like how this tale includes hopeful values - brilliantly written in as a dream. Amazing how you grasp the reader in your clutches in so little time. Hugs:) Sheila |
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| Reviewed by David Perry |
9/4/2007 |
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| Another wonderful work. At the end the man dreams not of survival, but of humankind in worldwide harmony. Better too late than never, I guess. |
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| Reviewed by Lyndsey Nelson |
9/2/2007 |
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| I love the ending. If all your stories are this good I can't wait to read more when I have time. Keep up the GREAT work. Truth be True-Lyndsey |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons |
8/23/2007 |
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| A story that caught and held me from first line to last. Interesting that the salt snow fell...no more drinkable water and yet they were headed to the sea, which is salty. Intriguing story line. Thirst, I suppose was the driving force. Excellent writing. Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
7/11/2007 |
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| Excellent write. A very interesting story. Chilling ending. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Patterson |
3/5/2007 |
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| Good images and story line. It takes the reader there. I can see and feel what's happening ! Slowly man heads toward his bitter end. ...........M |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
12/18/2006 |
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Chilly cool Bro. Regis, VERY chilly cool!
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Janet Bellinger |
3/24/2006 |
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Compelling read with a chilling ending. Well done, Regis.
Janet |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
12/18/2005 |
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Captivating write, Regis! Very descriptive. Another great one.
God bless,
Sandie. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Koosis |
10/18/2005 |
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Beautifully written. Your words have a rhythm that swept me along right to the end and you created wonderful atmosphere throughout. This is just the kind of story I love, too, so it was my good fortune that this is the first thing in your den that I selected to read. Absolutely captivating. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
10/11/2005 |
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E x c e l l e n t ! Just hope it doesn't come true!! We Earthians have long been acting like small children left alone with a room full of rich food, tasty water, caged animals, a petting zoo and every conceivable kind of toy. Why shouldn't we take all we
want? Why shouldn't we tear things up? Always more where
that came from. . .right? Thank you for writing this. . .all you are doing to spread the word! 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Hilding Lindquist |
9/19/2005 |
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Well written, draws the reader in and through.
The problem I have with it is the theme. It doesn't interest me.
However, I am interested in YOUR viewpoint--because of how you write about yourself and your views--so this story has value in filling in the void of what I don't know about you. In that regard, it is very interesting, and pulls me toward more of your work.
Best,
Gus
Hilding "Gus" Lindquist
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| Reviewed by Christine Boyce |
8/25/2005 |
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| No matter how bad things get we can still dream; but as you say, the bad and the worse aren't necessarily cured by dreams. Nice story...but maybe "nice" isn't the right word. ;-) |
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| Reviewed by Michael Ault |
7/16/2005 |
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| Another excellent read. Reminded me of the twilight episode where the entire episode the main character complains of the heat...supposedly the Earth is moving toward the Sun...then at the last scene we find out the girl is havin a fever dream and in actuallity everything is freezing... |
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| Reviewed by April Smith |
6/16/2005 |
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| Wow, I really enjoyed this story. Each sentence kept pulling me to the next one. Chilling read! Thanks for sharing, April |
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| Reviewed by The Smoking Poet |
5/26/2005 |
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Regis, how haunting, and how one must hope, still, never to become real, yet with each day of our mad living and disregard for all good things, I wonder... where and how it will all end...
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
5/24/2005 |
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Quite a short story, Regis.... Your words took me along as though I were your main character. You have a way of making the reader part of your story. (:D
Peace. |
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| Reviewed by Anne Brooks |
3/22/2005 |
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Interesting story,Regis.I really enjoyed it.As I read it,I felt you were depicting the end of the world or a miracle of some kind.
Your lyrical and realistic writing really captures the reader's attention.This is a philosophical work on Life and death..and thirst. Anne Pawlak. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick McCormick |
3/17/2005 |
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Very well written Regis. It had me as in a spell.
Pat. |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very |
1/23/2005 |
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This is as poetic as ever You kept me wondering and then hoping The weirdness of it all. all the same age people. Amazing Regis. Wonderful. I loved the cooperation of all too. The title is catching as is this.
You're GREAT Regis AWESOME! SUPERB!
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| Reviewed by Robert Petranek |
1/2/2005 |
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| there is a poetic quality to your prose... a rhythm in the language. i wonder if it is something to do with knowing more than one language that makes one... i don't know... perhaps more sensitive to the way words flow together. my prose is clumsy, my poetry, the small canvas, as i imagine it, is much better i beleive b/c i can concentrate on the words, and images rather than the plot. good work! good story. |
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| Reviewed by Cheryl Kaye Tardif |
8/14/2004 |
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This story has a superb "Outer Limits" feel to it!!
I really enjoyed it! It's the kind of suspenseful horror that I nejoy perhaps most...something tangibly possible....SCARY!
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| Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione |
3/27/2004 |
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| I liked this one, I also write with a Twilight Zone vibe so I can sense the feel of this one right away. This is a cross between Ray Bradbury with Larry Niven. Powerful work here, has a gothic vibe for a science fiction story. I got one linked on news titled "The Statue" it was huge so it needed to be hosted from my site. Thank you for the review on one of the epics, so I thought I would return a favor. Your other stories are good as well but just could not decide which one to write the review for because I was writing for three stories here. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/27/2004 |
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| thought provoking read |
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| Reviewed by Scott Zachary |
2/24/2004 |
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Reminds me of George Orwell's writing. Mesmerizing. I don't often get out to visit other dens, but I'm always glad I did when I run across a piece of writing like this. Thanks.
Scott |
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| Reviewed by Louise Bohmer |
12/9/2003 |
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| A snowfall of salt, the last of the survivors marching to the sea; I always enjoy stories that obviously took deep thought, and a strong original voice from the artist. Another great write, Regis! |
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| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
11/28/2003 |
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| Enjoyed the story Regis. Very creative write! |
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| Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love |
11/26/2003 |
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| Wow. You are a great story teller. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Phillips |
11/26/2003 |
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| A good story made more powerful by the skilled use of understatement. I wondered about the use of terms like "humanoid" and "earthling", though when the story appeared to be being told from the perspective of a human. I'd like to read more from this author. |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
11/17/2003 |
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Eerie.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by J. Pajot |
10/27/2003 |
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| Great story. Reminds me of something from "The Twilight Zone." |
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| Reviewed by Cristina Van Dyck |
5/20/2003 |
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| I love your language, simple and descriptive. It pulls me along makes the story interesting and refreshing to read. Very good! |
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