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Stagnant
by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary → (All Poetry by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary)
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A brand new one, written for a picture challenge.

Stagnant

How did it happen?
I was a fine vessel once,
sturdy and proud,
withstanding the pounding
waves of strife,
nary a tremor to betray me.
Now, I'm awash, drowning
my sorrows in
stagnant waters, wondering
if anyone will notice
my sinking.

Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 09


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 Reviews of "Stagnant"
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2009
Another great poem. Toss me a life preserver first then I'll pull you out too. Buddy system man...........

Reviewed by Helena Harper
Reviewed on April 29, 2009
Indeed, indeed, Dallas - what a clear picture you paint. So often we walk around in a state of unawareness, blinded by our own concerns and your poem reminds me to open my eyes and be more aware of the plight of others. Thank you, my friend.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 29, 2009
captures this state of mind quite vividly ...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2009
Lovely writing indeed...Hugsss

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 28, 2009
WOnderful metaphor here...and beautifully presented.

Reviewed on April 28, 2009
You're not. This poem is a declaration you are not sinking but floating smoothly in backstrokes of fine verses and strong content, unmindful of life's currents, stagnant or not.

Cynthia


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