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Out of Control
by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary → (All Poetry by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary)
   Rated "R" by the Author.
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This one's for Peter:

Out of Control

From the moment I first
laid eyes upon you,
I felt it, that old
familiar surge of
anticipation,
expectation, of
promised adventure and, yea,
even ecstasy.

My fingers whisper
over your smooth surface,
memorizing the feel,
seeking fulfillment --
in increasing frenzy, I strive
against control, against
the restraints of inhibition.

Finally, in complete submission,
I grasp my instrument and
press into you, my
rhythmic thrusts spill ink into
the ecstasy of creation:
"Once upon a time...."

Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 08

 


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 Reviews of "Out of Control"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Dallas, this is so passionate...the way all writers should feel about their work.Love how you've done this.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 7, 2009
A passionate write.

Ron

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2009
Yes, indeed. Beautiful piece!! Thank you Dallas. Big fan of the bait and switch!!! Enchanting words and ever so true. Passion, lust, affliction, addiction...the fire that consumes, the object thereof may change, but the hearth in which it is kindled looks very much the same!

Reviewed on June 6, 2009
Please, people, it's about a piece of paper. I guess I should have just sent it privately to Peter. I'll remember that next time.

Reviewed on June 6, 2009
Well, now - this one gets the reader's attention! Well done, Dallas. As for ZR's comment - ignore. Agree with Linda Settles' comment.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey
Reviewed on June 5, 2009
While your transparency is a bit beyond my victorian comfort level, Dallas, the literary quality of your poetry is beyond reproach. You might need to elevate the rating to R my friend if you'd rather not be verbally tarred and feathered. :-)

Reviewed on June 5, 2009
This one has LaBelle's style all over it! Holysmokes, this is a hot little number! Well done, Dallas; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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