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Apartment Living
by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary → (All Poetry by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary)
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Apartment Living

Five-thirty A.M.
Sleep has fled.
I lie wide awake,
trying not to move,
so as not to disturb my wife.
My mind grapples with images
of this new bug they've discovered
in Adrianne's lungs --
what is it?
Will it delay the transplant?
From somewhere
comes a buzzing noise --
when it stops, I realize
it was just the refrigerator.
The wall clock emits
soft, chucking noises
as it fights gravity for
twenty seconds of every minute.
Outside, hissing tires on I-5
tell me the morning shift
is dodging its way to work.
Far off, and lonely,
a freighter blows its horn,
echoing across Puget Sound.
Six-oh-five A.M.
The alarm will sound in an hour --
sleep continues to elude me.
Lights pinwheel across the ceiling
as a car passes by in the street.
There's a whoosh as
the neighbor flushes his stool.
Somewhere in the distance
a siren wails --
an urgent sound we know all too well.
Every time I adjust my position,
my wife stirs --
I worry that I'm disturbing her sleep.
Six-fifteen A.M.
I doze fitfully.
"Good morning, Seattle!"
the radio alarm startles me.
I smell coffee
as the pot clicks on, to brew.
Another day -- another week.
I wonder what surprises
lie in our pathway today.

Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 00


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 Reviews of "Apartment Living"
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
I hope it will be a good week with good not bad news. You brought your slice of life alive for me.

Reviewed on August 9, 2009
You capture apartment living vividly - or must be in my living room! LOL Right now, as I'm reading and reviewing you, the neighbor's baby is howling her head off - guess she doesn't want to go to bed. *sigh* Well done, Dallas.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
you capture atmosphere and mood with some finely tuned images as well as emotive undulations and personal situation ...

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
WONDERFUL!...THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS JUST FABULOUS. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
God, that's so descriptive. You really describe so well that sleepless, racing mind you get when you're bothered, can't sleep and then start to notice every damned thing imaginable. I used to describe this to people as "I could hear a cockroach pissing on cotton."

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Accurate portrayal of a sleepless in Seattle, morning.

Ron

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Dallas, there is so much in this poem...and you've written it so well. No one really knows what goes on in another's life, do we? Your last three lines say it all.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Your images pull the reader in. Great job. I hope the week is good.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
You have very effectively shared the "mood" surrounding you, Dallas. I am awakened to the contrast between the sounds that you hear and the ones that I hear up on this side of the mountain facing the great river and the Coast Mountains... ...birds, distant boats, silence. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Somehow, I think this poem has more about other things, besides apartment living. BTW, did you hear me honk at you from I-5 as I sped by on my way to Bellingham? I enjoyeed this extremely.

Cheers,
Dan


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