you have a beautiful and memorable style, poet. taking something so mundane and revealing the magic which engulfs us daily. thank you for sharing, and happy holidays!
What a magical and inviting poem this is. The thing you call sleep sounds like an enchanted and romantic waltz between your soul and your muse. Suspect all who read this now yearn to go where you go when slipping under their covers:-)
Aberjhani
I guess I can see the beauty of the ethreal world you paint. And, You paint it so well too. But for me, sleep is a terrifying experience, and instead of sweet dreams of whatever, I have nightmares of what was. My terror is real, and it keeps me up most nights until the next morning when it gets light out. Only then, with people up and about do I feel really safe. But your poem here is bright, and happy (I wish I could be happy). Anyway Gwen, thnx for sharing your wonderful gift of insight. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn and determined to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have a right to be."
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
Peace,
Carolyn
Aberjhani
Splendid work
Peter
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have a right to be."
splendid poem!
Paul;-)
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
then write.
TX
And that is truly a wonderful thing, as is this poem, Gwen.
Love,
Eileen