I pray this is fiction...GAD, chilling to even contemplate! Short lines only increase the feeling of helplessness in witnessing this horror. VERY well done.
How horrible for you. IS autobiography? God, the things we are
forced to go through. E x c e l l e n t j o b. Mulberry trees
make the scene all too vivid. Blessings always, 'Pea' <3 ~~~ PS:
An old saying was often a source of solace for me: "If the road
is rocky when you are young, it will be smooth when you are grown."
Road's hardly ever smooth, I hear people thinking, and they're right.
But having it rough in the early years does prepare you. Realize how lucky you are when things go right! Hugs!!
my gooseflesh has gooseflesh..my immediate reaction is to hug the child in you to chase away that horror..but reality stands, always, between protective desire and the NOW. by writing this, if it is truly your memories..i hope that those demons have been exorcised. by the mere confrontation, alone.
big hugs..and blessings of comfort and light.
krissy
I agree with Reg below completely Gwen !
The Mulberry Trees are symbolic and indicative of an even greater horror and involvement !
Marvellous and chilling composition !
Peter
I really felt this because as an adopted child i was abused and it constantly flashes across my face but i am ok today and it is ok to write about the pain and to be able to read what others write as it helps me.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2006
Hell of a piece of writing here, Gwen. A lot was observed hiding amongst the mulberry trees, a lasting view of evil.
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Birgit and Roger
I pray this is fiction...GAD, chilling to even contemplate! Short lines only increase the feeling of helplessness in witnessing this horror. VERY well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
forced to go through. E x c e l l e n t j o b. Mulberry trees
make the scene all too vivid. Blessings always, 'Pea' <3 ~~~ PS:
An old saying was often a source of solace for me: "If the road
is rocky when you are young, it will be smooth when you are grown."
Road's hardly ever smooth, I hear people thinking, and they're right.
But having it rough in the early years does prepare you. Realize how lucky you are when things go right! Hugs!!
big hugs..and blessings of comfort and light.
krissy
The Mulberry Trees are symbolic and indicative of an even greater horror and involvement !
Marvellous and chilling composition !
Peter
Regis
TRASK
Chanti
Reindeer
TX
Superb gem of a poem Gwen!
Eileen
I agree with Jerry here!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(